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first try with vexelling, looks weird
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post May 22 2005, 08:03 AM
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the hair and face is weird, i know.
 
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post May 22 2005, 08:37 AM
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that dot on her elbow looks funny and the hair needs some work.
it's good for your first try.

i'm trying to vector for my first time, its so hard. sigh.
 
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post May 22 2005, 10:39 AM
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It's actually not that bad. The shapes could be smoother, and there could have been more detail put into it. The colors are kind of weird for the whole thing. But, it's awesome for your first vector. Good job!
 
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post May 22 2005, 10:53 AM
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FIRST?! No way. I gotta say, that looks awesome for a first. I suggest you change the dot on the elbow first. The nose looks somewhat awkward, but whatever. Either way, nice job! ^_^
 
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post May 22 2005, 10:55 AM
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ya i agree, the hair and face do look weird.

its spears rite?
 
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post May 22 2005, 11:20 AM
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not bad for your first! happy.gif just try to use better colours and have smoother edges.
 
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post May 22 2005, 12:05 PM
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i agree with steph. the colors you chose are a bit weird. like on one of the arms, you went from tan to black. and the colors overall are kinda...blink.gif but it looks great for your first. you could actually tell its Britney Spears, unlike MY first one
 
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post May 22 2005, 02:20 PM
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Mm yea the colors are weird. If you notice, her arms look pasty, while her stomach is tan.. or rather, orangy, but still she looks tanned there. So it's almost as if her face, especially neck, and arms are pale while her stomach is tan. You should evenly distribute colors so it balances it out. Acttually, the fingers look pretty good. :] Ooh, the right side, where her shirt ends, overlaps her arm. Is that supposed to be that way?

Remove the black dot and maybe you should add a really dark shade of tan in which to produce a crease there, which seems to be what you're trying to do.

All in all, nice for your first. :] I suggest hot having brown for her hair, since britney's dyed hair is now blonde lol. Sorry, but the colors of her hair kind of remind me of poo. mellow.gif But yes all in all, really good for your first ^_^
 
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post May 22 2005, 02:22 PM
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it looks really nice, isn't this from SNL?
 
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post May 22 2005, 03:00 PM
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the shirt and the abs looks pretty good and overall, it is fabulous for your first vexel! flowers.gif it is a bit choppy and rough but keep practicing. _smile.gif
 
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post May 22 2005, 04:54 PM
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hehe belly button and dot on arm looks funny funny funny ^_^.
 
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post May 22 2005, 05:01 PM
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I think it's pretty good for firsts. I also agree with Steph. The colors are kinda weird. Try using different colors but yes. I can totally tell that it's Brit. And it's kinda choppy. Just keep practicing _smile.gif but you did a good job.
 
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post May 23 2005, 01:39 AM
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i think its pretty good.. u jus need to work on shading..
 
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post Jun 4 2005, 02:43 AM
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very choppy but very excellent for ur first vector...keep practicing
 
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post Jun 4 2005, 10:46 AM
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Its good, better than I could ever do on my first vector.
 
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post Jun 4 2005, 10:52 AM
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Thse sides are a little jagged , you need less contrast btwn the skin colors dont worry I was like that when I first started too.
 
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post Jun 4 2005, 10:58 AM
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Really good for your first vector! :D And like everyone else said, the colors are wierd, like her skin is orangey..
 
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post Jun 4 2005, 11:43 AM
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good for your first. just use better shades of skintone and make it blend more
 
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post Jun 18 2005, 08:57 PM
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it's good for your first, don't worry, you'll get better soon.
 
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post Jun 19 2005, 02:42 AM
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it's awesome. i like the grungier look, it rocks.
 
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post Jun 19 2005, 05:25 AM
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Awsome! Great pic, especially for your first.. omg =D
 
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post Jun 19 2005, 07:58 AM
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the edges look choppy, and why is the hair green?
 
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post Jun 20 2005, 06:28 PM
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It looks alright, but maybe you should try making the hat a bit .. smoother?
Eh, pretty good for your first attempt to vexel though.
 
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post Jun 20 2005, 06:46 PM
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ohhh coooool...it looks like watercolor! thats so cool...my vectors dont look like that..=\
 
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post Jun 20 2005, 10:56 PM
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Woah, that's good for your first! :) The skin's tinted a lil too green or yellow and some parts are even pasty, you could do with more layers too but other than that, not too shabby, not too shabby at all.
 
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post Jun 21 2005, 09:45 AM
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