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 May 20 2005, 11:43 PM
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I just got an urge of inspiration from Lurlene McDaniel's books, so I decided to write a little something. I don't think they're that good though...
 Mirror Mirror mirror on the wall, Mirror mirror can you hear my call, Mirror mirror can't you see That it's hard to find the guy that's right for me, It's not that long 'til I die So God why can't you hear my cry? I stared at this guy I liked He walked over and told me to go take a hike Feeling deprived of that emotion called love Mirror Mirror here I am eating a box full of dove. Difference We're torn apart 'cause we're from two different worlds You're amish and I'm not, How can such a difference tear us apart? It's been days since we talked It's like we've been thrown into different rooms doors both locked Maybe our love just wasn't meant to be... Must we pay such a fee, just to be together just you and me? |
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May 22 2005, 02:26 PM
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 I liked those poems. They were cute. Try getting into different subjects and stuff besides love.
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May 24 2005, 04:31 AM
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yea love poems are quite the norm. but i loved mirror keep writing your awesome!
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May 28 2005, 06:08 PM
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Ooo... I really like the first poem. Nice work!
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May 28 2005, 06:40 PM
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 ...and this is me.. Group: Member Posts: 3,518 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 57,899 |
It sounds nice....
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