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New Vector, all done.
monkigurl77
post May 14 2005, 02:10 PM
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Here's the topic I made When I was alf done, but here is the final product. I am really proud of this one and I have all the layers saved so I can change anything.



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post May 14 2005, 02:12 PM
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i like the shading and all but aiya, the vector just looks wierd to me. sorry...
 
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post May 14 2005, 03:27 PM
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The face looks weird.
 
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post May 14 2005, 03:43 PM
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its not a bad vector, but the face looks a little funky, thats all.
 
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post May 14 2005, 03:45 PM
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1. You can't tell where her chin ends and begins.
2. Her shoulder/arm does not look proportionate; it looks too small compared to how it should be.
3. The details of her face look really odd.

Aside from that, it's okay; If you fixed those little details, it would look much better.
 
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post May 14 2005, 07:00 PM
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Take that advice.

It looks really awkward, but it's nice.
 
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post May 14 2005, 07:14 PM
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good job on the teeth, those are usually hard

however, the eyes look kinda small. also, there's just a line on her nose that is a lot darker than the rest of her skin. i would make it lighter and a similar color to the skin.

otherwise, its so-so.
 
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post May 14 2005, 07:20 PM
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Mmm yea the face looks strange--It doesn't quite resemble her... Also, the hair looks sort of flat, imo. Her body, she looks a lot thinner than in the original. I think you're missing her back or part of her soulder.. o___O

But yea, it's a pretty good vector. I like how the shapes are very and the color choice is pretty good. :]
 
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post May 14 2005, 07:32 PM
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in a way...it look wierd...i think it's the eyes...
 
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post May 14 2005, 07:36 PM
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her eyes look weird.
her cheeks dont blend in with the rest of the face.
her arm looks like its coming out of the middle of her chest.
the nose looks like squidwards nose.
 
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post May 14 2005, 08:04 PM
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QUOTE([4]eternity @ May 14 2005, 1:12 PM)
i like the shading and all but aiya, the vector just looks wierd to me. sorry...
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I agree, it looks somewhat..hmm choppy?
 
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post May 18 2005, 06:34 PM
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i think it's partly because of the face shap, but good job! at least you know how to curve your lines..

and i don't. so thumbsup.gif
 
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post May 18 2005, 06:42 PM
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It's alright, you did a pretty good job. The background is cool XD
 
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post May 18 2005, 11:23 PM
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she needs eye sockets. Then it wouldn't be THAT bad...
 
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post May 18 2005, 11:46 PM
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not bad. Look weird cause i can't really tell who is it. I like the colors though. Nice job. KEep at it.
 
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post May 19 2005, 10:27 AM
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i like the background lol.. vector is pretty weird.. i think u should blend the skin a lot more.. then it will willl all good
 
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post May 19 2005, 02:41 PM
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i htink it looks liek a skeleton..fix the cheekbones
 
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post May 19 2005, 03:01 PM
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The face scares me, but everything else is really good!

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post May 19 2005, 03:15 PM
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its looks nice,but why is the neck so long?it looks out of proportion with the head and body. i think you forgot the shoulder or something.
 
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post May 19 2005, 05:51 PM
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her face is kinda weird but hey its better than wut i do
 
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post May 19 2005, 08:01 PM
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O__O << i have never seen your do a vector...you are very good. _smile.gif

everything looks great except for the face. it looks kinda like a Picaso painting so work on that but other than that it looks awesome! =D
 
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post May 19 2005, 08:04 PM
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Looks pretty good, but it looks nothing like her, IMO. Also, part of her shoulder is missing, as well as her entire back... so she looks more skeleton-like than she normally is (she's so thin!). I like how you did the clothing though. :]
 
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post May 20 2005, 04:27 PM
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do something different when you vector. im soo sick of seeing BORING vectors where people just retrace the picture. it's not art. make it creative
 
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post May 20 2005, 08:58 PM
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She looks like an alien with the neck and all huh.gif but its vectored well!
 
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post May 21 2005, 12:20 AM
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the shading's nice but the face looks kind of weird.
 
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post Jun 4 2005, 02:51 AM
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it does look kinda weird, but i really like it.
 
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post Jun 4 2005, 02:45 PM
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eh looks kinda weird.. but good
 

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