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i've caught the rapping bug, don't hate, please?
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post May 9 2005, 06:06 PM
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oh no! who the f**k let me outta my cage?
give me the motherf**kin' mike and get off the stage!
you really think that you can beat this shit right here?
this girl is really somethin' that chu oughtta fear,
like a balla in the middle of the deep dirty south,
you betta hush bitch, shut your mothafuckin' mouth!

cool.gif i think i did pretty well for my first rhyme if i say so myself.
 
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post May 9 2005, 06:12 PM
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That was really NICE girl im loving your flow//
For the right PRICE you maybe able to rock any show//
Pass me the mic and we can show em how its done//
We can make a million and invest it in a mutual fund//
You should just keep doing what you do//
Because I like your rap and Im feeling you//
 
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post May 9 2005, 06:18 PM
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so much cussing....



BUT WHO GIVES?
that. was. totally. WICKEDDDD.
 
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post May 9 2005, 08:31 PM
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haha, that was really good !
 
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post May 9 2005, 09:22 PM
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buncha white girls.
 
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post May 9 2005, 09:23 PM
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i'm not into that egotistical kinda rap. More of the rap that has meaning to it. But sometimes i want mindless rapping to a good beat to dance to.

QUOTE(sikdragon @ May 9 2005, 9:22 PM)
buncha white girls.
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rapping is not a purely minority thing..
 
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post May 10 2005, 12:45 AM
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sure.
 
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post May 10 2005, 01:10 PM
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nightmare4taki, i like the sounda that,
i'm glad i have no haters, glad you got my back,
i'll try to talk somethin 'bout the war in iraq,
damn, man, that rap was extremely bad!

biggrin.gif thanks, guys! i appreciate the feedback.
 
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post May 10 2005, 02:00 PM
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OH no here it goes again
another dum f*ck just came in
i aint trying to be mean, i aint scared of you
you cant handle me even if you had a krew
straight from cali im representin the west
only the illest survive only the best
dont give a f*ck if u from the south
i heard bitches like love to shut their mouths
i took a glimpse of your rap; "this i wack"
not even this bitch is able to make a track
so pass the mic get off the f*ckin stage
dirty a$$ whor* get back in your cage

hahah no offense juss wanted something to write =] IM not hating nor member bashing !! but its koo your rap was aiight
 
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post May 10 2005, 05:59 PM
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QUOTE(dispn0ygonekrazy @ May 10 2005, 2:00 PM)
OH no here it goes again
another dum f*ck just came in
i aint trying to be mean, i aint scared of you
you cant handle me even if you had a krew
straight from cali im representin the west
only the illest survive only the best
dont give a f*ck if u from the south
i heard bitches like love to shut their mouths
i took a glimpse of your rap; "this i wack"
not even this bitch is able to make a track
so pass the mic get off the f*ckin stage
dirty a$$ whor* get back in your cage

hahah no offense juss wanted something to write =] IM not hating nor member bashing !! but its koo your rap was aiight
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that was actually pretty good. i especially liked this line:

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so pass the mic get off the f*ckin stage
dirty a$$ whor* get back in your cage


that was cold, but still good. happy.gif
 
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post May 10 2005, 10:28 PM
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haha nice raps to everyone here.

i would attempt to write one but i probably wouldn't succeed.

hmmm.....*goes and tries*

when i actually get one that im semi-satisfied with, i'll post it. maybe wink.gif
 
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post May 11 2005, 08:55 PM
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oh goodness gracious.

i'll say i don't like how raps are spoken, but it takes an amazing mind to come up with lines like those.

though i can't say i appreciate the cursing..
 

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