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[*Statistik*]

Time to unleash my new dope track//
wish we hope to bring back 2pac//
i do things that no one can do//
it might not be clear, but ill make it true//
more money problems thats true.//
cuz the more money i make is a problem for you!//
suprised that you people never knew//
why, ill make your mic expell//
cuz all you do is spit on da mic to rebel//
pass years in freestylin, ive excelled//
you dont belong here, just go die in hell//

[me1issaaaa]

Umm... how pleasant.

"Dope" Track. Hahahaha.

[sikdragon]

powerful words from a small ass wigga-
you wishin you knew the truth, which is bigga-
your insecurity is your downfall-
cuz your lines barely rhyme at all-
nobody feelin ya shit-
cuz ya less than shit when ya spit-
your mama wishin just a little more than a little bit-
that her fat ass woulda done aborted it-
the slop that ya fake ass brings to the table-
has enabled me to take a stab, and dip the gravy ladle-
you cooked fried and burnt, your sloppy rhymes,
just been served-

[sikdragon]

2-pac, the a is an ahh sound like the 'o' in log.

[Angel_Cece]

" you dont belong here, just go die in hell// "

you cant die in hell. your already dead...

[*nightmare4taki*]

That was a nice rap although you bit a line from Cassidy and reprashed it.

Jason- rap *new*
more money problems thats true.//
cuz the more money i make is a problem for you!//

Cassidy - Im a hustla
more money more problems is true//
cause the more money i make the more problems for you//

[miszSERENiTY]

GIVE IT UP ! PLEASE ! I BEG U ! SPARE US ALL !

[Paradox of Life]

1. True and True don't rhyme.
2. As stated by nightmare4taki, you stole lyrics
3. As stated by sikdragon, 2 pac and track don't rhyme.
4. As stated by Angel_Cece, you can't die in hell.
5.
Definitions of expel:
verb: as from a country
verb: put out or expel from a place
Example: "The child was expelled from the classroom"
verb: eliminate, as of bodily substances
verb: cause to flee
verb: remove from office
5a. Expell isn't a word, but expel is (omg, I'm Spelling Bee champ).
5b. A mic cannot expel or be expeled
6. 'i do things that no one can do//' I suppose you can, like posting 17 raps when all you get is negative feedback and still not get any better.
Just summing things up for you.

[jennyjenny]

you're dumb.

:puke:

[Rachel]

Jason we went over this
You suck at it
Please quit while your ahead
Hell, just stay in bed
Rapping is not your "thing"
You ain't got nothing to bring.
I just pwned you and I'm white
I hope we laugh at this all night.

*Bows*

[xbr0kensmil3]

^^ LOL !!
I agree with what AkaRyux said.

[MrElsewhere]

very good, very very good.

PSYCH!

okay honestly, "rhyming" true with true?

[miszSERENiTY]

I`m gonna be a copycat and follow crazyjew
The person that sucks the most has to be you
come on; you thought true
rhymed with true
I just might suck
as bad as you do;
but its okay because i don`t overuse the word foo;



hahahah..okay i`m bored.

[uLoVeMikeRoch]

Jesus f**king christ jason.
Do i need to go to your Non-ghetto suburb house and rip out your f**king keyboard just to get the f**king message through your f**king head?

YOU f**king STEAL EVERYTHING.
YOU f**king DISGRACE EVERYTHING THAT IS ANYTHING.
JUST STOP TRYING AND PICK UP A NEW f**king HOBBY.
LAST TIME I HEARD POKEMON AND YU-GI-OH WAS STILL POPULAR FOR 12 YEAR OLD DUMBASSES, WHO HAVEN'T GOTTON TO THE PUBERTY SECTION IN THEIR HEALTH CLASS. (sorry for the caps)

[yukichan]

sigh..
why do u continue to do this?
if u r going to make something like this, at least make it so it makes sense and its original..

[sikdragon]

if it doesnt make sense to you, dont reply.

[Paradox of Life]

Actually, saying something doesn't make sense would be constructive criticizm to help the author make his message more clear.

[sikdragon]

it's rap. rap doesnt make sense to most people. rap hasnt different rules. It's not exactly poetry.

[rOckThISshYt]

powerful words from a small ass wigga-
you wishin you knew the truth, which is bigga-
your insecurity is your downfall-
cuz your lines barely rhyme at all-
nobody feelin ya shit-
cuz ya less than shit when ya spit-
your mama wishin just a little more than a little bit-
that her fat ass woulda done aborted it-
the slop that ya fake ass brings to the table-
has enabled me to take a stab, and dip the gravy ladle-
you cooked fried and burnt, your sloppy rhymes,
just been served-

Mother f*cker you rock!! So very true. Now that is a rhyme!

[MrElsewhere]

it's rap. rap doesnt make sense to most people. rap hasnt different rules. It's  not exactly poetry.

rap IS poetry.

you cannot deny this fact.

[*nightmare4taki*]

it's rap. rap doesnt make sense to most people. rap hasnt different rules. It's  not exactly poetry.

Rap stands for Rhythm and Poetry.

[sikdragon]

thanks.

WHAT part of not exactly poetry dont you understand?

[MrElsewhere]

what part of rap is poetry don't you understand...

Poetry - writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm

http://www.m-w.com

??!!

[Im So Vain]

sikdragon i dont know if your rap was spose to be a reply to jasons but it was aight.

[sikdragon]

it was.

what part of rap is poetry don't you understand...

Poetry - writing that formulates a concentrated imaginative awareness of experience in language chosen and arranged to create a specific emotional response through meaning, sound, and rhythm

http://www.m-w.com

??!!

rap is not exactly poetry. yeah it has rythm and expresses emotion, but so does banging on a drum. rap has different rules and different critiques. it's like saying a square is a rectangle. when in fact the measurments and proportion are completely different.

[*not_your_average*]

you guys, c'mon! don't stop, jason. you'll get a beatdown.. eventually.