A poem written by myself., hope you enjoy. |
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 Apr 27 2005, 01:59 PM
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 ...Alone in the darkness, and withering away...  Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 110,995  |
Just To Die
Fallen and broken… Alone on the floor, Wondering if there is life That’s worth fighting for. Some things can’t be helped, That’s just a part of life… Wondering what is there that is still worth living… And conjuring things that have yet to be… f**ked up Confused And not coherent You begin to think you’re all alone So you begin to cut yourself. You cut for every pain You cut for every thought… And soon, you cut just because you cut… Not so sure of yourself, And not so sure of others… You begin to pop pills… Pop for anger, Pop for defiance, and pop just for the sake of popping pills… It’s pathetic on how low people sink just to get a cheap thrill or to ease pain… It’s sad to think you’re the only one… It’s so selfish to want to die, After people give and give so you have a chance at life… It’s just a cycle… Cut, pop, cut, pop… It never ends. So stupid to think like that and yet, Nobody can stop you from doing it So go ahead and kill yourself Slowly Painfully And shamefully… All done Just to die… X_Demented_Mind_X (sorry, dont know where to post poetry...and sorry for the "F" bomb... I am trying to cut back on cursing...) |
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Apr 27 2005, 02:00 PM
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 i've never wanted anything rationale. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 |
Moved to writing forum =)
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Apr 27 2005, 02:01 PM
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...Alone in the darkness, and withering away... Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 110,995 |
thanks crazy!
 heres another poem Life and Death Moldy hands and fingertips Turning black with coagulated blood. Empty eyes and pasty skin Smelling of rot and contagious plague. Death is not a pretty thing So, they pick up ways to cope. How many people have to suffer From something beyond their control. Cheery, youthful, sprightly beauty Dancing circles around life itself. So naive are many people As they hide from truth, behind religion. Life can be quite demanding So they pick up ways to cope. Live your life to the fullest Before your time is near. X_Demented_Mind_X (and for all of you who are curious, My name is Alxander{and yes it is ALX no E and no I} so please reffer to me as either demented or Alx thanks for reading!) |
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Apr 27 2005, 02:18 PM
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 SCHGEB!SCHGEB! Group: Member Posts: 1,786 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,217 |
they're actually really good. u have good writing skills
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Apr 27 2005, 04:03 PM
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...Alone in the darkness, and withering away... Group: Member Posts: 91 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 110,995 |
thanks rad.
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