ok... a new poem, my first in a week or so |
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 Apr 23 2005, 09:48 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
that much more to cry
a penny-worth of sigh a tear drop's full of truth and a crystal clear sky lets me know of power blood running through our dreams ten times ten is fifty everythings upside down a million whispers echo a silence worth of sound fifteen ways to get nowhere one straight unwinding road curving through the zig zag got to get you home fifteen ways to get nowhere only one to love |
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Apr 23 2005, 10:51 AM
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 i've never wanted anything rationale. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 |
I like it! It is different and has a good flow =)
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Apr 23 2005, 11:00 AM
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 WWMD?! - i am from the age of BM 2 Group: Member Posts: 5,308 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,848 |
 that's really good, jamesy.
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Apr 23 2005, 12:33 PM
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 This is all my luck, it's all I got. Group: Member Posts: 1,373 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 76,532 |
QUOTE fifteen ways to get nowhere only one to love I really like that part. Gosh. I love your poems. Very nice. |
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Apr 23 2005, 12:53 PM
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QUOTE fifteen ways to get nowhere only one to love That's my favorite part! James, it was very nice! The flow...awesome. Sorry, my thought are kind of jumbled right now and I don't know what else to say other than, IMO, this is one of the best poems you've written. |
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| *stephinika* |
Apr 23 2005, 01:22 PM
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i love it, the last lines especially. it flows so very well when being read. james, you are amazing.
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Apr 23 2005, 01:23 PM
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 .bubblicious inspirations. @ www.bubbliciousoul.com Group: Member Posts: 466 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,228 |
it's fantastic!
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Apr 23 2005, 02:58 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
thanks everyone ;)
there is a lot more traffic in writing nowadays!!! i'm LOVIN it |
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Apr 23 2005, 04:18 PM
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I like this poem.
Poetry always sweeps the ladies off of there feet. |
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Apr 23 2005, 04:28 PM
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really like the poem.. but dont you think someones gonna like steal it or something?
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Apr 23 2005, 05:17 PM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
noy really.... i mean if anyone wants to use it for anything, they can pm me... i'll just be flattered
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Apr 23 2005, 06:00 PM
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Wonderful peom, You're very good w/ adj and describing.
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Apr 25 2005, 12:25 AM
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That's really awesome. =]
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Apr 27 2005, 04:31 PM
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 SCHGEB!SCHGEB! Group: Member Posts: 1,786 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,217 |
wow. I really love ur writing. amazing job, once again
 QUOTE(nightmare4taki @ Apr 23 2005, 4:18 PM) I like this poem. Poetry always sweeps the ladies off of there feet.  Very true, actually. I love when a guy can write about their feelings and such in such a unique way |
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Apr 27 2005, 10:52 PM
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 :D Group: Member Posts: 212 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,682 |
oh i love it! great job james!
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Apr 30 2005, 02:59 PM
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 Residential Crazy Child Group: Member Posts: 934 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 116,897 |
You do have a way with words.
I love the last two lines the best. It describes life and has a bit of romance in it. Good Job ^^
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