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 Apr 20 2005, 03:59 AM
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 hello : )  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139  |
Uhm...not really liking this peice so please give me tons of feedback
 By the way, the title of this topic is supposed to be Everyday, but apparently I can't type!He gives her a friendly hug but to her it's more than that. She feels those chills up her spine when for that minute she's in his embrace. She feels comfort, security, warmth, love, and so much more. She has the urge to hold him tighter; bring his body closer to hers. She wants to hold on longer because she loves that surge of emotions. In a flash, she imagines how it would be like if he were hers; if she were to be able to hold him always. What it would be like if these feelings lasted. Maybe her heart wouldn't be so hardened and bitter. She thinks all of this in that one minute of pure contentment. Then he lets go. He doesn't even realize all the joy he gave her with that one embrace. To him it was just a friendly everyday hug. Then he goes to the one he really loves. And she watches as tears fill her eyes. She sees how when they embrace, he grabs her tighter and pulls her closer. She sees how he is the one filled with that pure moment of bliss. Except it's longer than a moment. Why? Because they have eachother. She stands there awkwardly not knowing what exactly to do next. She can't come to grasp with her feelings. Everyday it's the same. Everyday she's left confused. Does she like him or is she just fooled by this false illusion? Maybe she just feels these feelings because she's been deprived of them for so long. She wants it so bad she makes herself believe that she could have it with him. She knows that she can't. She knows he's in love with someone else. That he would never feel that way for her. Yet, when they embrace...is it all in her imagination? All of those feelings? Surely he feels it too? Everyday, every single day these thoughts replay in her mind. Everytime they embrace. When will it stop? |
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Apr 20 2005, 04:03 AM
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 Holla if ya hate me Group: Member Posts: 2,386 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 80,819 |
'Tis awesome
 Rik likes it. Just like the romance novel he read last week.. you should write a book of romance!! |
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Apr 20 2005, 05:52 PM
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beautiful. absolutely beautiful...i loved it. so emotion filled.
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| *islandgirl4eva* |
Apr 20 2005, 10:44 PM
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Awww, Chrissy. I can totally relate to this. When Alex hugs me, even though we're just friends, there ARE times when I want more. Crossing that line into the unknown, it's a bit scary.
I love it. It makes me realize that I feel the same way as you. *sob* |
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Apr 21 2005, 12:49 AM
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 This is all my luck, it's all I got. Group: Member Posts: 1,373 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 76,532 |
Its so lovely yet so sad. I hate those sort of feelings.
Great job. I love your writing. |
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Apr 21 2005, 02:16 AM
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hello : ) Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
Thanks so much you guys =)
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Apr 21 2005, 11:33 AM
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 .bubblicious inspirations. @ www.bubbliciousoul.com Group: Member Posts: 466 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 112,228 |
awww..... great words.
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