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Oh Dearest Ariel, a sonnet
*AngelicEyz00*
post Apr 17 2005, 05:29 PM
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I thought this should be its own topic. >.>

A sonnet by me. The structure: 14 lines, abab cdcd efef gg, iambic pentameter.

This is to you my dearest Ariel,
You have one of the best abs on CB,
They make me think of a damn burial,
Just kidding cause they make me think of me.

When you take off your shirt it makes me wet,
I think of all the fun that we could have,
To get you in my bed, oh my, just bet,
And think of all the fun that we could have.

Although you said my breats are silicone,
And that you lick better than all the rest,
I did forget to mention on the phone,
That I want you to lick my sexy chest.

So Ariel, although you smell like poo,
I want to let you know that i love you.

[bows]
 
*mzkandi*
post Apr 17 2005, 05:31 PM
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Bravo, Bravo!! Just lovely.
 
KELLYYY
post Apr 17 2005, 05:31 PM
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"That I want you to lick my sexy chest."

That made me laugh.
 
Teesa
post Apr 17 2005, 05:32 PM
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does he really smell like poo?
 
*jooleeah*
post Apr 17 2005, 05:35 PM
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Haha, how wonderful.
 
*stephinika*
post Apr 17 2005, 06:03 PM
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[applause] lovely work elba. happy.gif lol
 
Flaunted
post Apr 17 2005, 06:07 PM
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<3<3<3<3
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hahahahahahahahaha
elba, i love you.
 
*islandgirl4eva*
post Apr 17 2005, 06:30 PM
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Bravisimo! That was beautiful. *wipes tears*
Hahaha, that's was great.
 
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post Apr 17 2005, 08:03 PM
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Oh my god. Hahahaha. I love you, Elba. biggrin.gif


*lick*

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*AngelicEyz00*
post Apr 18 2005, 08:52 AM
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rRrRRrRrRr...

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Damn, I'm so good. cool.gif
 
*nightmare4taki*
post Apr 18 2005, 03:28 PM
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Hello angeliceyz00 i just though i would stop by
And say damn nigga that sh*t was fly
 

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