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| *Kathleen* |
 Apr 15 2005, 02:24 PM
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Yeah, it's short - so sue me. I was in Latin class when I wrote this.
The dead leaves fall like appendages As moonlight clears the path For the dilapidated carriages Haphazardly, the townspeople peer in Only to find remains Of the three decapitated men "It was but a myth!" one shouts And another panics While another maintains doubts Meanwhile, quite off in the distance, The bright orange sphere appears To uplift and manage the resistance What happened next to the poor souls Is but a myth itself, Lost within past stories told |
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Apr 15 2005, 02:33 PM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
"the bright orange sphere appears". downright creepy. =]
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Apr 15 2005, 02:48 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
the first stanza is the best!
i really like it, i think shorter poetry is better, personally |
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Apr 15 2005, 06:55 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Ooh, I love the first stanza.
Nice work, Kathleen.  I like writing in Latin class as well. :P Nicely done. |
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Apr 15 2005, 07:04 PM
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 Ah, mon Dieu ! Group: Member Posts: 2,274 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,587 |
love the movie,
love the poem. 
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| *Kathleen* |
Apr 15 2005, 07:19 PM
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Aww thanks, you guys! Haha. Yeah...Sleepy Hollow...Johnny Depp...
 That makes me want to go watch it now! 
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| *stephinika* |
Apr 16 2005, 12:03 AM
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^^
hehe yeahhh...nicely written though. i quite like the words you used. |
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