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"Tata, to those who care, because I never did", you have to hate this nonsense
RiddleMeWonders
post Apr 14 2005, 03:10 PM
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fell in love with a boy
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Know anyone that just IRKS you to death? That they have so much, and yet they act like their life is hell because of some imperfection they have, when all anyone ever does is try to make them happy. Everyone is happy because THAT PERSON is there, and yet they still find some way to complain and write songs filled with utter loneliness and heartache. What if that person did what they’d been hinting at all this time? What would you think? If you could write their suicide note for them, what would it say?


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"Tears of laughter on my notebook paper"
"To hell with you and all your friends" <--------------------HAHA! Sorry... Just tired

"Farewell to those who care"

Failing my destiny
Failing the rest of you
I’m letting it go.
To hell with the best you
This is my tata
to those who cared
Not sorry to say I never did
Thanks for the bed that we shared
I’m done with you.
I was aware you were there
And I know that you loved me
But I think it’s time to finally say
I didn’t give a damn
Thanks for your help anyway
All the times
They taunted and teased (about how much I liked to eat)
All the times
You hugged me and squeezed (my love handles and said I was a sexy beast)
Meant nothing at all to me


With all my perversions,

Azzole McDude
 
wounded
post Apr 14 2005, 04:42 PM
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Do you miss your little girl?
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interesting and a very well written piece.
 
sadolakced acid
post Apr 15 2005, 08:09 PM
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dripping destruction
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good poem. conveys emotion nicely.
 

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