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| *islandgirl4eva* |
 Apr 11 2005, 02:04 AM
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I hate this me...a woman scorned, the old crone who hides herself from life. Hands permanently procuring those knitting needles. The needles I used to scare you away. I threatened to stab you in the heart, the same way that you did to me. The searing knife of betrayal singed me soul, to leaving it whimpering in the wake. To see your face everyday is to die a thousands deaths. I watch you strut around like a stallion who mounted the fairest mare. And I, the discarded ass who taints the very ground upon which you stride. I shall forever look upon you from my portico and remember how I was cast aside to remain in the shadow while you bask in the glow. I want to thank you for reminding me of how far removed I am from the world. I'll remember it always.
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Apr 11 2005, 02:19 AM
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 hello : )  Group: Official Member Posts: 4,227 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 13,139 |
Love it Naomi. I love the metaphors and the words you used. Written very well once again =]
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| *stephinika* |
Apr 11 2005, 08:20 AM
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saw it on your xanga, but i had to comment again. its beautiful. the words and imagery you use is amazing. i loved it.
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Apr 11 2005, 08:27 PM
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QUOTE(M1SSxCHR1SSY @ Apr 11 2005, 3:19 AM) Love it Naomi. I love the metaphors and the words you used. Written very well once again =]  I agree totally. The metaphors used are great. Well done, Naomi. |
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Apr 11 2005, 09:13 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Lovely job, Naomi.
You're a very good writer. I love this one. |
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