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Wasting Time, i didnt write this, my friend lia did
vampireduster
post Apr 7 2005, 08:42 PM
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Waste of time
Was messing with you
waste of time
was just thinking of you
Waste of Time
All of the talk about us
Just a waste of time
Just things you said that made me wonder
A waste of time
Next time, there wont be
Because your a waste of time


I just wanted to know what you all thought of it. I thought it was good but yeah i would like to know your opinions
 
xTINAA
post Apr 8 2005, 02:23 AM
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hello : )
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I think the concept is good and something that I personally can relate with however I still don't think the way it was written and the syntax was all that great. It didn't seem to flow to me when I read it.
 
*islandgirl4eva*
post Apr 8 2005, 12:18 PM
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^^ I agree.
 
baller30
post Apr 9 2005, 02:22 PM
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yea i agree with what they said
 

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