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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
PARDON ME FOR BEING SLIGHTLY BITTER AND VENGEFUL
If it were an eye for an eye We’d be blind a thousand times by now My wrong against yours to try to make things right No longer assault on me, now it’s a f**king fight If looks could kill We’d be dead a thousand times by now If kisses could resurrect We’d have two thousand lives to spare But that’s the problem: if I wasn’t chained to you I’d toss you off the balcony So I try to motivate you to Help me sever this bond that’s killing me If I’ve been pretending to care all this time I should be in movies and win Oscars Because this is the most believable performance I could ever do in my entire life Forgive me for feeling Wronged and used Forgive me for feeling A collar around my neck, the leash in your hand Because I forgave you The entire struggle you have put me through Now pardon me for being Slightly bitter and vengeful If you had a stone for everything you did You could build a bridge across the sea If we’re so heartless What have we been hearing beating faster EVERY TIME WE KISSED! Where was the nail in the road that we Ran over when we crashed and burned I have to thank you, for you’re The teacher of the hardest lesson anyone has ever learned If I’ve been pretending to care all this time I should be in movies and win Oscars This performance, I’ve poured so much heart into it I’ve buried myself in debt Forgive me for feeling Tossed in the sewer Forgive me for feeling Ill from your disease without a cure Because I forgave you for The entire struggle you have put me through Now PARDON ME FOR BEING SLIGHTLY BITTER AND VENGEFUL TOWARDS YOU! You can make me your punching bag Pummel me till your knuckles bleed I’m wearing a smile all the while But once I stand up for myself Land some blows of my own You send me walking down the green mile If I’ve been pretending to care all this… If I’ve been pretending to care! IF I’VE BEEN PRETENDING TO CARE THEN WE’VE BEEN PRETENDING TO HAVE THESE NIGHTMARES IN WHICH WE LOSE EACHOTHER FOREVER I CAN’T DO FOREVER. I CAN’T EVEN DO A MONTH! Forgive me for feeling Dissected for the hell of it Forgive me for feeling TATTERED AND TORN AND FORLORN! I FORGAVE YOU FOR EVERY TIME YOU’VE f**king KILLED ME NOW PARDON ME FOR BEING SLIGHTLY BITTER AND ENGEFUL TWARDS YOU!!! |
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Apr 6 2005, 11:55 PM
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angry, but powerful. your words are always so well put together.
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Apr 7 2005, 06:40 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Official Member Posts: 4,882 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,064 |
I agree with Steph, I like how you used the If.. then.. stucture in many of your lines.. That truly makes it more powerful with more meaning.
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Apr 7 2005, 04:11 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
Angry, beautiful, pure. I love this. Absolutely and completely. It's really a jaw-dropping piece.
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Apr 7 2005, 08:23 PM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
I love it.
The title is great. Excellent job, as always. I love this one. I like the emotion behind this one. Great job once again. |
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