What if..., OLD poem I wrote |
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 Apr 4 2005, 04:41 PM
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What if life wasn't as it seemed,
or what it would appear? Would you live your life the same, or live your life in fear? We live our lives day by day, in this miserable world. Only to be shunned by others, and cornered by the world. What if we were all the same, no race, no color, no religion? Would it all still be the same, or is that only what I envision? Life never seems to work out, nothing ever gets done. Is it the same for everybody, or am I the only one? |
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Apr 4 2005, 09:32 PM
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 highfive. Group: Member Posts: 1,301 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 32,951 |
Wow. I like it. It's pretty good. Especially the concept.
I don't think that life would ever work out if everything was the same. Everyone would be the same; doing the same; just boring. |
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Apr 5 2005, 04:49 PM
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Amen to that.
good poem. Good Poem Indeed. |
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Apr 28 2005, 02:08 AM
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 ^-^ Group: Member Posts: 1,676 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 107,668 |
that reminds me of The Giver, it's a book I had to read for english.
Everytihng was the same int he world in The Giver, and ti was boring and there were problems with it. Often they killed people because they were different, they did'nt fit in, so they had to be "Released". that's what they called it. A baby twin was "released" because you woudl never be able to tell them apart, causing confusion, which the community couldn't handle. Also they saw only in black and white, which made everything dull, lifeless.  not very apealing.although I'm all for the no religion thing 
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Apr 28 2005, 03:47 AM
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 I'll never be who I was again.. Group: Member Posts: 2,886 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 77,981 |
QUOTE(HoodieObsessed @ Apr 27 2005, 9:08 PM) that reminds me of The Giver, it's a book I had to read for english. Everytihng was the same int he world in The Giver, and ti was boring and there were problems with it. Often they killed people because they were different, they did'nt fit in, so they had to be "Released". that's what they called it. A baby twin was "released" because you woudl never be able to tell them apart, causing confusion, which the community couldn't handle. Also they saw only in black and white, which made everything dull, lifeless. not very apealing.although I'm all for the no religion thing  ya i read the book before too..it was so sad.. i like the poem..its really good...good job! 
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Apr 28 2005, 03:55 PM
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I like the concept...it makes you think.
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Apr 30 2005, 11:21 AM
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Nice<3 Wow that was really good, really makes you think about life more.
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Apr 30 2005, 10:53 PM
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^ agreed it makes you really think
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May 1 2005, 10:07 PM
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 boo Group: Member Posts: 5,512 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 71,765 |
Yeah, really makes you think. Really does.
Lovely poem, btw. ^^ |
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