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 Mar 26 2005, 03:50 AM
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 oh sweet pestilence  Group: Member Posts: 2,251 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,876  |
I don't have a name for these..yet. Maybe someone can help me..please.
My incomplete heart will bleed for you day after day it will die for you and I don't know why but you want me to shattered & smashed is my paper thin heart it's been thrown away and torn apart my american heart will bleed for you day after day it will die for you and i don't know why but you want it to this paper thin heart of mine will rip in half for you I've spilled my sould on your kitchen floor and I'm sorry I'll clean up this mess and I've dropped my emotions into your fireplace once again and I'm sorry so sorry for the fire |
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Mar 26 2005, 04:04 AM
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Nice Work. You poem has a nice delivery and a symbolic message to it.
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