Little Bit Of Nothing, ...a poem |
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 Mar 25 2005, 11:54 PM
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Little Bit Of Nothing
I've got nothing and that is going to make me cry My life is currently void Empty Of all serious meaning I'm alone. Broken after a long relationship. I love you she said. I love you... How can those three little words... bring a man to tears? I've got nothing Nothing As I sit I try to write something anything Unlike me, this isn't my style.... What is my style? Surly not this forced piece of shit This isn't a poem but a rant and a rave Some tears and some sorrows I'll be better tomorrow... then... still with nothing I'll regret writing this this... TxT copyright©2005 BeyezB |
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Mar 25 2005, 11:56 PM
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whoa thats good.
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Mar 26 2005, 08:22 AM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
it is excellent... but what happened with all the random threads with th sam ename... *confused*
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Mar 26 2005, 08:44 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 30 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 102,683 |
Oh..the site wasn't responding when I posted the original...so I hit refresh a couple times lol. I can't delete the messed up posts. I'm sorry. :)
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Mar 26 2005, 09:11 AM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
^^ no worries... actually i think its happened to me acouple of times
i really like the last line |
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Mar 27 2005, 10:06 PM
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 i've never wanted anything rationale. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 |
i loooove it! esp. the part about saying I love you.
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Mar 27 2005, 10:39 PM
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yerp! Group: Member Posts: 3,489 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,454 |
Very, very nice.
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Mar 28 2005, 12:41 AM
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 sorry. i drowned your fish. Group: Member Posts: 1,485 Joined: Feb 2005 Member No: 98,683 |
u did a nice job on this .. really good.
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