I GUESS, THIS IS A POEM.. |
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 Mar 15 2005, 07:12 PM
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A sweet embrace that caught my eye.
She had her eyes closed and her arms wrapped around him. She really was in love with him. His clutch was loose and he looked around. Was he embarassed? Was it all just a show? Did he know soemone was watching him? Was he watching a certain someone? My eyes caught his for a breif second. I wouldn't dare look him straight in the eye. His face was blank with hardly no expression. I turned and a sick feeling came over me. I just knew they wouldn't last and sadly...i was right. |
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Mar 15 2005, 08:40 PM
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I am Sandy. Hear me roar. Group: Member Posts: 1,152 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,896 |
i like it.. its quite sad
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Mar 15 2005, 10:14 PM
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^^i know. it actually happened to my friend
 he broke her heart
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Mar 15 2005, 10:19 PM
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It's great. How long did it take you? if it took less than 10 minutes, you are fit to be a poet someday
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Mar 15 2005, 11:44 PM
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 Syaoran...kawaii... Group: Member Posts: 19 Joined: Mar 2005 Member No: 113,627 |
I'm touched by your poem...and it's not just because i've been kind of moody lately...it's good
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Mar 16 2005, 12:04 AM
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very nicely written. simple, but has a good story behind it, meaningfully done. keep it up.
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Mar 18 2005, 02:04 AM
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aw...how sad
 ..so much emotion involved in it.
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Mar 18 2005, 11:58 PM
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and to think it started out as a xanga entry lol
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