can someone rate my freestyle too? Options

[*Statistik*]

IF YOU GUYS THINK THAT OTHER DUDE IS ME ITS NOT. feel free to check the ip.

well my freestyle is hotta than his and y'all know it..and ill prove it here

You be lying to createblog like you got a long pipe
Had me screaming last night man dude you outta sight
I don't give a f**k about you; you know I am for real
And you just know how I feel you can f**k me on da pill
Nigga let me hit you weed satisfaction guarantee
You can call me crazy boy took that nigga for his weed
Please listen to da truth kangsta thats right
Understand this shit been nasty trick on fools
You and nothing to me Ím a f**king M.C.
I can recognize a groupie when I see her in front of me
I don't mine if you bust a nut you deserved it
I think you just got served boy, give it up already
All dat shit dat you be doing trying to bust me wide open
Eat my shit nigga you know I got to have that tongue in motion

[imafreakinazn]

-claps-
that was awesome!
:3

[azn_r4pf4n]

-claps-
that was awesome!
:3

i can see an improvement, but it's not the best.

[imafreakinazn]

well i liked it
as long as someone cares...

[Azn Kid from NY]

lol....this kid....

[imafreakinazn]

lol....this kid....

um.
who are you talking to?
and what do you mean by that?
>_>
<_<

[azn_r4pf4n]

um.
who are you talking to?
and what do you mean by that?
>_>
<_<

he meant jason.

[imafreakinazn]

but.
um.
my name is jason too
XD
and i'm serious!!
haha but yeah
okay
just wondering about that.......

[*basick*]

shut the f**k up and never rap again please

[*nightmare4taki*]

Why you trying to diss me when your style is rotten/
Dont f*ck with me or else u will end up in the land of the lost and forgotten/
next time come at me with the proper etiquite/
cuz u dont want to see how easy the tech spit/
Watch out whose name you really speak of./
Be a real man and not a internet thug/
Hey kid your a joke u cant be serious/
Burn u like rubber from the fast and the furious/
Rep your hood and throw up your click/
Since you all on fifty why don't you suck his d*ck/
Step up to me again if u dare/
THEN I WILL SHOW U A REAL MASSACRE/

[azn_r4pf4n]

^ lolz "show u a real massacre", the heck?

Be a real man and not a internet thug/
Hey kid your a joke u cant be serious/

LOLOL, INTERNET THUG!
ya, true.

Rep your hood and throw up your click/
Since you all on fifty why don't you suck his d*ck/

haha.

[Nugget]

shut the f**k up and never rap again please

yes please

dont.. ..do..it.. ..ever.. ..again

EDIT

^ lolz "show u a real massacre", the heck?

Be a real man and not a internet thug/
Hey kid your a joke u cant be serious/

LOLOL, INTERNET THUG!
ya, true.

Rep your hood and throw up your click/
Since you all on fifty why don't you suck his d*ck/

haha.

heh i think massacre as in 50 cents album?

his freestyle is like truuu

u on 50s d*ck
heh check it u wrote 2 topics on 50 about revenge wit fat joe and such and how they need to get a life bc they wrote revenge and how 50 is better then nas..PLEASE

[jnukes]

jason .. *sigh* .. please .. stop .. .. and i say that nightmare4taki's rap was better

IF YOU GUYS THINK THAT OTHER DUDE IS ME ITS NOT. feel free to check the ip.

well my freestyle is hotta than his and y'all know it..and ill prove it here

who ?

[azn_r4pf4n]

suggestion

M-Flo <3 Melody - Miss You

M-flo is a pretty great group to listen to, Jason. Great flow from em', and u should listen to em'. Here's a bio of one of the rappers.

verbal


date of birth: 1975.8.21

blood type: O

interests: writing poetry in coffee shops, eating food from around the world, painting appreciation, reading, movie appreciation

special talents: RAP

favorite artists: Mountain Brothers, Company Flow, Ras Kass

influential artists: Gang Starr, Company Flow, Ras Kass, RAN D.M.C., A Tribe Called Quest, Leaders of the New Skool, De La Soul, Stetsa Sonic

* verbal is still studying hard and going to graduate school in Boston. In contrast to his powerful onstage rap, somewhere in his unpainted personality is a funny, relaxed Christian. The integrity of his character peeps through if you pay attention to his lyrics. Serious above all, he hates anything crooked. Listen to his "serious" rap and that attitude should be clear.

+ credits ; avex trax (translated english bio)


He's from boston, so thats why he knows about the mountian brothers.

[royalfreshness]

what are you? asian? stop saying nigga.

[miss l.e]

what are you? asian? stop saying nigga.

yup. stop saying n***a.

[clarissa]

lol, i think this is all funny :)

[azn_r4pf4n]

ohhh the agony!! nightmare4taki vs jason1992.








rofl, we got some online rap rivalry here.

[karrar]

ill battle you jason just pick a topic

[azn_r4pf4n]

ill battle you jason just pick a topic

LOLOLOLOL!!!

oh man, this is getting silly.

[william]

i like nightmare4taki's raps better, but shouldn't this be in humor ?

[*Statistik*]

Yo taki shut the f**k up man or ill knife ya
Your annihilation is set for sure, no fighting
Youll be deaded beheaded for biting, thats a violation of necro law
Dont look at me leeay, I really take that severely
You really think you wont end up like jeff healy, barely
Able to see me when youre near me, jooks for dirty looks
Me being shook of a wanna be crook? spare me
I got some serious faults, enslaving women in mysterious vaults
Craving sadistic assaults, bathing your slit wrist in salt
Shove an ice pick in your balls, youll seizure like a fiend
Going through sickness withdrawls
You diss, you realize you made a mistake, Im like a razor blade in a cake
Like being sprayed with raid in the face, while this beat is being played
Till you bleed with an ear ache, you afraid, walking through the gay parade
Your a loser and I mean it, no one likes u
The only person that likes u is michael jackson
cuz last time i was walkin in the streets, i saw u with a rubber penis
shut up and turn off your rap shit
they dont mean nothing but bullshit
if you want some come get some
cuz ur messin with the best, and getting dissed like the rest
i hope u dont get pissed and get a physical stress


OHHH u bitch

[azn_r4pf4n]

jason is slowly improving, but i can't believe he still won't give up.

[*Statistik*]

Because impossible is nothing man. You dont know what'll happen unless u believe in ur self in rappin..rappin is my thing..for life yo i try hard

[*nightmare4taki*]

Yo azn he might be improving/
But his sh*t is not inspirational or moving/
i will show u the real meaning of a struggle/
Hit ya so hard and have you seeing double/
i will show u the real meaning of a struggle/
Hit ya so hard and have you seeing double/
Like eminem you need to snap back to reality/
Before this turns sh*t to a tragedy/
Jason dont give a damn if your black white aisan or caucaisan/
You need to stick to school and get a good education/
I will finish you and diminish you/
Kill you, resurecct you then replenish you/
In plus your just a kid you dont carry a knife/
Stop being a internet thug and get a real life/
You need to quit speaking out of your term/
Be a man like usher and just let it burn/
YOu need to improvement please understand/
I can show you what it is to really be a man/
This is the nail in the coffin the knife and the dagger/
Shrug my shoulder off with my pimp-like swagger/

[william]

i don't know a lot about rap, but jason, your "freestyles" don't seem to have any kind of flow. the amount of syllables in each line seem to be completely different and follow no pattern whatsoever. a lot of the lines don't rhyme or make sense. you don't stick to one theme... it's pretty random. all of these things become glaringly apparent in the last eight lines of the most recent one you posted. work on that stuff.

[*nightmare4taki*]

Besides as a mc im the meanest/
Your the only one getting stuck up the ass by Michael Jackson's penis/

[Nugget]

Yo taki shut the f**k up man or ill knife ya
Your annihilation is set for sure, no fighting
Youll be deaded beheaded for biting, thats a violation of necro law
Dont look at me leeay, I really take that severely
You really think you wont end up like jeff healy, barely
Able to see me when youre near me, jooks for dirty looks
Me being shook of a wanna be crook? spare me
I got some serious faults, enslaving women in mysterious vaults
Craving sadistic assaults, bathing your slit wrist in salt
Shove an ice pick in your balls, youll seizure like a fiend
Going through sickness withdrawls
You diss, you realize you made a mistake,Im like a razor blade in a cake
Like being sprayed with raid in the face, while this beat is being played
Till you bleed with an ear ache, you afraid, walking through the gay parade
Your a loser and I mean it, no one likes u
The only person that likes u is michael jackson
cuz last time i was walkin in the streets, i saw u with a rubber penis
shut up and turn off your rap shit
they dont mean nothing but bullshit
if you want some come get some
cuz ur messin with the best, and getting dissed like the rest
i hope u dont get pissed  and get a physical stress
OHHH u bitch

HAHAH yo man thats funny..razorblade in a cake//till u bleed wit an ear ache..WTF!!?!? ROFL yo man ur such a loserr..that was thee GAYEST VERSE i have ever EVER heard..and u aint the best WTF ur messin wit my head.. haha i like him the truth is NO ONE LIKES U..wtf wit micheal jackson!? geezz..u make no sense..to mee


nightmare got it all right..hes the one..u cant take him..heh i actually understand him more thne u man..jsut please GIVE IT UP

Because impossible is nothing man. You dont know what'll happen unless u believe in ur self in rappin..rappin is my thing..for life yo i try hard

heh rappin is UR thing?? noo no its not..

[azn_r4pf4n]

Besides as a mc im the meanest/
Your the only one getting stuck up the ass by Michael Jackson's penis/

he owned jason right there.

**edit**

im not gonna battle anybody, but im just gonna type stuff down for the heck of it.

reminice \\
in the midst \\
i can think of a resume \\
quality of the afraid \\
so overplayed \\
but the poetry in the midst \\
poetry not stiff \\
ever since \\
the beginning of time \\
arrogance \\
inherited \\
it's just like a lost heretic \\

something about poetry. i got bored. don't ask.

[azn_r4pf4n]

*whoops double post*

[Nugget]

hehe u funny ^^^ god ppls are bringing up micheal jackson..

sniff he was ACCUSED alright?! doesnt mean the man molested children GOD..

but yea i still say nightmare is awesoem

jason please sit down

[*nightmare4taki*]

somone should poll to see if they think he is guilty inocent or not sure lol

[azn_r4pf4n]

somone should poll to see if they think he is guilty inocent or not sure lol

what do u mean by that?

[*Statistik*]

Yoyoyo taki
your name is taki cuz all u do is rap in chinese
i cant understand you
Your rhymes arent even worth a dime
I'm a true artist and this kid dosent even have a recording label
let me tell you this son
If you can beat me in this rap game
you can be on fear factor kissin my feet wit cheese on it
my beats are neat and there's no doubt about it
everyone respects me cuz i rap with honor
you just spit out shit to make fans make fun of u
i own the streets baby and will i be the next rap legend? maybe.
here's a treat for you son
I'll rip you off,
leave you in the desert 'til the voltures strip your corpse,
then rape your f**kin' wife, until my d**k is soft
'til the flesh is pealin' off,
I'm a devil consealed in cloth,
walk, walk or get stabbed with a fork,
you got a hole in your stomach,
yo plug it up with a cork, you dork,
lots of blood loss, red cross,
couldn't help your dead boss cut his head off,
brutal, sadistic, the only way,
I'll be remembered, after I'm dismemebered,
and my bones decay, a rap legend,
to the aggressionary session
when you hear my sh!t your ear drums dont quit
put the split in your wig and expose you bald ass
drop you in the ocean and raise up the tide
and thats all folks the end of you comes quick
like your relationships with d**k
trying to play it off but inside you wanna die
trying to impress your whole life and livin a lie
ur rap aint makin any differences
cuz everyday you have no life writin down lyrics on a piece of paper
hey son, i got stuff to do instead readin your whick wack ignorant lyrics
why dont u juss drop and stop
i betcha you'll make another rap just to get revenge
dont try avenge my rap
cuz i dont want any of yo bullshit

HAHAHAH

[azn_r4pf4n]

quotes:

my beats are neat and there's no doubt about it
everyone respects me cuz i rap with honor

where are ur beats?


ur rapping, but this isn't honor.

everybody respects u? everybody has different opinions, how can everybody respect a certain person?

[*nightmare4taki*]

Man i really dont have the time or the paitence/
Especially for a kid thats really below low maintence/
You dont freestyle we all know itsl rehearsal/
I put you in a chokehold reversal/
Jason your flow is killing me and you know you feeling me/
You beating me, nahhh not likely/
Your style is not original nor is it pure/
Why am i battling such an amateur
All sh*t look what i have done and did/
I feel bad finishing the career of a kid/
Jada ripped 50 now im going to rip you but hopefully you want get hurt or shot/
Im about to turn this into ripley's believe it or not/
Im so harmonious and sincere with it when i spit it/
And speak a different language so these haters dont get it/
Encrypted like a computer program stored in the ram/
Process raps like a pentium when i make my stand/
Jason this is madness please stop this/
You beating me is just LUDACRIS/
We can go back and forth but you will never out last me/
If u had a gun you wouldn't even have the nerve enough to blast me/
Ok lets analyze the situation and be realistic/
Your flow isn't average while mine is ballistic/
when are you going to learn/
you f*ck with fire your gonna burn/
Oh yeah and dont go the the clubs i go to and try to get crunk/
Because if you roll without a crew your ass will get jumped/

[jbjennessee13]

shut the f**k up and never rap again please

HAHA....yeah I'm with that kid ^^

[Nugget]

Yoyoyo taki
your name is taki cuz all u do is rap in chinese
i cant understand you
Your rhymes arent even  worth a dime
I'm a true artist and this kid dosent even have a recording label
let me tell you this son
If you can beat me in this rap game
you can be on fear factor kissin my feet wit cheese on it
my beats are neat and there's no doubt about it
everyone respects me cuz i rap with honor
you just spit out shit to make fans make fun of u
i own the streets baby and will i be the next rap legend? maybe.
here's a treat for you son
I'll rip you off,
leave you in the desert 'til the voltures strip your corpse,
then rape your f**kin' wife, until my d**k is soft
'til the flesh is pealin' off,
I'm a devil consealed in cloth,
walk, walk or get stabbed with a fork,
you got a hole in your stomach,
yo plug it up with a cork, you dork,
lots of blood loss, red cross,
couldn't help your dead boss cut his head off,
brutal, sadistic, the only way,
I'll be remembered, after I'm dismemebered,
and my bones decay, a rap legend,
to the aggressionary session
when you hear my sh!t your ear drums dont quit
put the split in your wig and expose you bald ass
drop you in the ocean and raise up the tide
and thats all folks the end of you comes quick
like your relationships with d**k
trying to play it off but inside you wanna die
trying to impress your whole life and livin a lie
ur rap aint makin any differences
cuz everyday you have no life writin down lyrics on a piece of paper
hey son, i got stuff to do instead readin your whick wack ignorant lyrics
why dont u juss drop and stop
i betcha you'll make another rap just to get revenge
dont try avenge my rap
cuz i dont want any of yo bullshit

HAHAHAH

wow ummm please just stop..wtf he doesnt rap in chinese..ehe i UNDERSTAND IT..its u taht i dont understand..and besides look at jin..beat some guy rappin chinese..and fear factor cheese?? wtf gay..u dont even have a record label..so dont talk..u aint gona be a rap legend..U CANT RAP..and wtf plug it up wit a cork u dork?? honey please..heck yea ull be remembered wit the worst rap..and writing down lyrics on a piece of paper mean they have no life??WTF..he just "AVENGE" ur rap like how many times?? this kid..jason..please..u get out of the rap life and do something else..i swear u think its the best and yet its not..just let it go kid..u make no sense in ur rap..god please just stop it.. ur rap akes me sick..cant take enough.u think of the stupidest things..like a blade of a cake..and kissin ya feet on fear factor wit cheese? gay enough said

edit

he just read nightmares lyrics and he outplayed u again

[*nightmare4taki*]

Yo Jason I really love this line. You finsished yourself off. LOL.

I'll be remembered, after I'm dismemebered

[jnukes]

^owned. by irony

taki > jason , i say .

no,

taki >>>>>>>>>>>>. jason

i'd type up somethin now and diss jason .. but .. nah .. dont wanna .. he's embarassed enough as it is =P ..

[*Statistik*]

yo taki
Watch this, when I shine I bring rain
Clouds, bust storms, yo, this ain't the norm
When I perform, I get you up out your seat
Get down with the real deal skills, then chill
Then show your ass how to get amped, then lamp
Stretch, flex, then tackle what's next
Cause MC's, that luck up, need to hush up
who can't brush up, on their rap style, shut the f**k up
Then duck from the one that gets buck-wild
I chop your ass in half, with a smile
Big grin, all teeth, for those who got beef
f**kin with me ock, you're six feet deep
Down in the ground, alone with no sound
while I'm up here CHILLIN, top billin
And illin, on all those, who oppose
I wanna take one more shot, strike a pose, uhh!
i came here to play wit no foo
im rappin just to make u say "who?"
my rhymes are true and yours is screwed as hell
and i bet you havent noticed and you already knew
you think ur so gangsta u dont even dress like a gangsta
last time i saw u were wearing a gap sweater and old navy jeans
im so popular my videos were played in da big screens
ur a loser and ur nothing to hip-hop
im gon reach the next level from this to top

The next 50-ja beef: Jason vs Taki

[azn_r4pf4n]

LOLOLOL!!! i cant believe he called this the next 50-ja beef.

[*wind&fire*]

i love his thread *hug*

[azn_r4pf4n]

i love his thread *hug*

ya me 2, it cracks me up.

[*wind&fire*]

you think ur so gangsta u dont even dress like a gangsta
last time i saw u were wearing a gap sweater and old navy jeans

you dont even look like a ganster

im so popular my videos were played in da big screens

i dont think you have music vidoes out... im startin to think plaigarism

[HongKongDong]

The next 50-ja beef: Jason vs Taki

That "beef" isn't even anything. Ja' must be one of the most poorest excuse for a rapper out there. IMO he is better then 50 though, but when it comes to freestylin' and battling 50 just takes Ja' out.

i love his thread *hug*

Hahhahahah... LOL... me too

[*nightmare4taki*]

Jason you must be a real dumazz/
Your making me look like nastradamus/
This is something that is essential/
If you get a record deal then everyon has potential/
Your not human so you must be inorganic/
Ill sink your azz faster than the titanic/
U talk like a thug but when the drama unfolds your the first to pass out/
Thx for giving me this opportunity to air you ass out/
And I must say I have yo admit you really are the best/
When it come to f*cking up like ron artest/
I wonder if 50 knows a wanksta like you listens to his music/
He probaly doesn't because he is just to reclusive/
Quit swallowing the peel and sipping the bottle/
Cuz the truth is none of us will ever date a model/
Im the truth i touch you you start aching/
We all know your gay so stop faking like CLay Aiken/
Nope Im not chinese but i will kick your azz like rush hour/
And throw you over a great wall of china guard tower/
All hail to jason the one who got murked/
I just really hope that the truth doesn't hurt/

[azn_r4pf4n]

Im the truth i touch you you start aching/
We all know your gay so stop faking like CLay Aiken/

lolz, pwned jason. clay aiken. haha

[*wind&fire*]

Clay aiken is a faker?

[*nightmare4taki*]

Jason I will show you friday the 13th

[NiKECHiQ]

^ LMAO so far taki is whoopin jason`s ass.

[*CrackedRearView*]

Okay kids, now that you've flipped ya lids../
It's time to getcha dumbasses taken off of the rap grids../
Both of ya'z dumb as hell../
Both of ya can't spell../
Both of ya got pubes? Cause damn man, it's hard to tell../
This ain't real life 'homie', it's an online site../
So what's the f**kin' point in this dumbass lyrical fight?/
Listen, take it from me, I know my shit../
You can't rap, you can't rhyme, you ain't cool, so just quit../
Why talk about bein' gangsta when you'z just a clown?/
I'm a poet, I can rhyme, I can take yo ass to town../
But I'd rather make my point pretty clear, pretty crystal../
Just need to know, mini-gangstaz, have you ever held a pistol?/
Have you even seen a P**sy? Have you even kissed a girl?/
Or confused your hormones so much that they'z spinnin' whirl n' twirl?/
I think I figured out the truth, I think I know the reason why../
I think I've found out just the reason that you online p**sies try../
I admit I'm not a rapper, I admit I'm not a 'G'../
I just wanna let you know, I just wanna set you free../
This goes out to both my 'dawgs', this is strictly for the clown../
Shut your stupid f**kin' mouths and sit your punk asses down./

I wanna see how the mini-pimps respond, seriously. Anyone can make rhyming couplets...you just have to f**k up all of the grammar to make it a 'rap'.

[*nightmare4taki*]

Im going to ask you politely to back off./
Becuz your not even old enough for michael to j*ck off/
Yes you have guessed it/
On the mic you have just been molested/
Your no challenge i havn't been tested/
Your flow is tired but mine is fully rested/
I want tell nobody why you sing high pitch/
All you need to know is im rick james b*tch/
I feel sorry for you since you have been misrepresented and used/
Game over, goodbye, try again you lose/

[*nightmare4taki*]

YOur below flawless and not even perfect/
Crack ill your career on wax so was it really worth it/
You f*ckin with a real wordsmith/
Dont be jeolous because you didn't get the gift/
Man i will murk you hurt you and put you in a coma/
Dont f*ck with me iff you want to graduate with your diploma/

[*CrackedRearView*]

Aight, I'ma just pretend like you didn't even speak../
Because honestly, 'e-thug' yo shit ain't even weak../
It's much worse, it's like those nails runnin down the chalk board../
All the shit you just said was disregarded, and ignored../
'Mini-pimp', you'z so funny man, you love to make me laugh../
But man my last rap shows you're taken off the rap graph../
You are no one, you'z a joke, you'z a second-rate fool../
You'z just verbally abused n' used so much I'll call you 'tool'../
So 'tool', what's your job, to try your best to get heard?/
I must be honest, no one cares about the word from e-nerd../
And e-nerd's word is getting trashed right here and now at my expense../
Shit, half the time your half-assed rhyme didn't make no f**kin' sense../
Yep, that's you, you mini-pimp, you're a f**kin' piece of work../
But I'm still laughin', I won't stop, I won't break my little smirk../
Here's my point just one more time, and you need to pay attention../
E-thug, e-nerd, 'tool', and mini-pimp just ain't worth mention../
So one more time man, give it up, run along and get to bed../
My last suggestion is just quit...just quit while you're ahead../

[dani41790]

heh woah. started out as jason vs. nightmare4taki now its CrackedRearView vs. nightmare4taki. hmmm

[toodlepops.]

Uhh, okay.
I would like to see both of you rap for real, that should be fun!

[azn_r4pf4n]

okay, this is becoming a nightmare. soon we're gonna have a whole bunch of ppl rapping.

[william]

this has to be one of the most entertaining threads i've read in awhile.

[clarissa]

LOL so funny.

[WTFwasIthinking]

Because impossible is nothing man. You dont know what'll happen unless u believe in ur self in rappin..rappin is my thing..for life yo i try hard

OHHH MY GOD.... stop watchin' 8 Mile and listenin' to 50's album 'n thinkin' you hip hop... you're beyond wack... jus' give it a rest

[cool_twin]

It's okay i guess......... not terrible.........

[*nightmare4taki*]

How much more can i take i really can't stand this/
IM about to make you disappear and vanish/
How many times do have to go on killing you/
Name me one instance where someone was feeling you/
Please just back away and get out of my face/
No one can save you not even pastor mase/
You and Jason provide a little comic releif/
But your just a citizen and im the cheif/
You got the game on smash, Okay just stooooooooooooooooooop/
Your the first forum rapper ive actually seen floooooooooooooooooooooooooooooop/
We all know you aint nothin but a b*tch ass hater/
I hitcha up and you start breathin harder than darth vader/
I dont understand what the f*ck you trying to do/
But baby shoes have more soul than you/
Im the one who makes the whole crowd jump/
If i hit you in the stomach you will probaly take a dump/
We all know you aint nothin but a scrub/
YOur name is crackedrearview because your a homo thug/

Make you swallow a hollow come along and follow
f*ck that gggggggggggggg-unit nope gggggggggggggggggoodbye

[*nightmare4taki*]

CRACKED REARVIEW YOU R A FRAUD ANY WAY CHECK THIS PEOPLE

IN his first rap he states

I admit I'm not a rapper, I admit I'm not a 'G'../

Second raps

'Mini-pimp', you'z so funny man, you love to make me laugh../
But man my last rap shows you're taken off the rap graph../

HE not a rapper but does rap shows

[*CrackedRearView*]

That's right bitch, I'm a hater fo' rill../
I hate stupid little kiddies with a big lack of skill../
I guarantee two points that prove that you'z a stupid nigga../
1)you dream of bein' famous 2)but you'll never make six-figgas../
Fact remains, this is the net, this is not a rap battle../
You'z a kid, you just gotta drop your bottle and your rattle../
All you bring at me is 'I'm da best, I got all da flow'../
And it's obvious you just don't listen, you'z just a little slow../
So I'ma slow it down a little bit just so you can hear../
Y-o-u a-r-e n-o-t c-o-o-l, is that clear, queer?
But I gotta life, gotta go handle reality now 'dawg', /
So have a nice day of dreamin' roamin' 'round createBlog./

[*CrackedRearView*]

Haha, what now? You gettin' scared, gotta do it outta rhyme?/
Why you quotin' from my raps? Did you shitcho' pants this time?/
This guy's a 'thug', remember? A 'rapper-soon-to-be'../
But look at his last one, he must be scared of CRV../

[*nightmare4taki*]

I'll finish u in 4 bars

Of course this creat blog sh*t is fun/
Your not neo so your not the one/
WHy you tring to brag and boast/
Called it a wrap your already done yet another m.c. who got burnt like toast/

[*basick*]

OHHH MY GOD....  stop watchin' 8 Mile and listenin' to 50's album 'n thinkin' you hip hop... you're beyond wack... jus' give it a rest

LMFAOOOOO............ BOTH OF YOU ARE WACK... YOU ARE WHAT KANYE WAS TALKING ABOUT IN "WACK NIGGAS"....

Wake up in the morning dawg, and you a Wack nigga
I'd kill myself if I was that Wack nigga
Everything you wear and rock, is just Wack nigga
Even if you flossin' rocks you still Wack nigga
You can't do it dawg you's a Wack nigga
Bitin' ass, bitch ass, trick ass Wack nigga
Even your daughter says "My daddy's a Wack nigga

[william]

So I'ma slow it down a little bit just so you can hear../
Y-o-u a-r-e n-o-t c-o-o-l, is that clear, queer?

rofl. i think that was the best two lines in this whole thread so far.

[Trolling]

I think I just sharted myself... OMG... Id kill myself jason or never show my face or sn around here again.... Take down that kangsta shit at least god damn -.-

[*nightmare4taki*]

Yo CRV I heard you and another dude kissed/
THis is a suicide and im only here to assist/
Im getting tired of wasting my time/
Your nothing but a video game thug so go and play true crime/
My flow has so many dimensions/
THats why my vocab is beyond your comprehension/
Enough, I see you have a lot of tension and stress/
I need a formidable foe because this is no contest/
Take your wack rhymes back to hill crest/
Your a b*tch, go put back on your dress/
And stop saying N*gga if your not a brother/
Your lyrics r wack no wonder you and jason were meant for each other/
My flow is precise and accurate/
ANd you dont want to see how a black n*gga get/
Your finished no more going back and forth cheers/
You couldnt top this in the next 100 years/
Step to me again and you will perish forever/
YOu coming back from this, never/

[*Statistik*]

hey taki wat did u mean by "jason i will show u friday the 13th?"

[*nightmare4taki*]

i was just kidding because your name was jason lol

[*Statistik*]

Yo taki and crack this is for both of u bitches
jersey holla..yo
I'm a hip hop artist, you style biting emcee sucker
Had a crayon contest with retarted kids and picked the wackest album cover
Picked the wrong emcee to diss subliminally, every line dissected
Yeah, I diss you on the internet, to your face and on record
For the record, I know the muck from which out you have stepped
First you sound like Beatnuts, then you're mr. 4,000 syllables
One bar, out of breath on stage a failure
Gotta quit rockin' mics and start rockin' an asthma inhaler
El-Producto, independent as Fox
Since when do indie records show up in a W-E-A box?
By saying your independent, you belittle the whole movement
Real emcee's work hard, ain't got investors to put out their music
Underground conspiracy, but this ain't used by No Limit
Mad 'cause you didn't blow up, the victim of your own wack gimmick
But some fools bought into it 'cause they don't know no better
That you're a hamburger pimp, only out for the cheddar

[*CrackedRearView*]

Yo CRV I heard you and another dude kissed/
THis is a suicide and im only here to assist/
Im getting tired of wasting my time/
Your nothing but a video game thug so go and play true crime/
My flow has so many dimensions/
THats why my vocab is beyond your comprehension/
Enough, I see you have a lot of tension and stress/
I need a formidable foe because this is no contest/
Take your wack rhymes back to hill crest/
Your a b*tch, go put back on your dress/
And stop saying N*gga if your not a brother/
Your lyrics r wack no wonder you and jason were meant for each other/
My flow is precise and accurate/
ANd you dont want to see how a black n*gga get/
Your finished no more going back and forth cheers/
You couldnt top this in the next 100 years/
Step to me again and you will perish forever/
YOu coming back from this, never/

First off, 'LMAO', your vocab's better?/
Take notes kid, I'm write you out a little letter../

Dear Tool, you don't know me, but I really wanna meet you../
Just need to say that verbally, CRV will always beat you../
He's a poet, it's his job, his words extend for miles past yours../
Which explains why he's in college and you're moppin' restroom floors../
Signed,
Reality
And one more thing, this shit ain't real, it's a game that no one plays../
It's the internet, from now on 'e-' should be on every phrase../
So like you say, when I e-step to you then I'll e-perish../
But I ain't e-scared, e-steppin' to you's somethin' that I e-cherish../
I cherish all this shit, it's all on your behalf../
Thanks once again, mini-pimp, ....I always need a laugh../

[*Statistik*]

^

I cook white like a good chef cook roast,
If i'm not the best at this 411 shit im real close,
If not post a reply and let me know,
Cuz im zone'n right now spittin raps wit ghosts,
And they tell me wat i need to know bout da game,
they tell me my results of makin it to heaven,i have no shame,
Cuz the way im livin' right now,even demons know me by name,
So i was always looked passed as a youngsta,
Satan slept in my room,didn't have a closet monsta,
u were born fake like a gay was born straight
so unlosen ur belt and put ur jeans a lil below ur waist
and cuff ur paints a da bottom
but nigga if i like dem, i'ma make u come up out dem
cause im on my bottom dolla
f**k da holla, i need a profit

[jnukes]

And one more thing, this shit ain't real, it's a game that no one plays../
It's the internet, from now on 'e-' should be on every phrase../
So like you say, when I e-step to you then I'll e-perish../
But I ain't e-scared, e-steppin' to you's somethin' that I e-cherish../

those were tight lines .. haha .. i mean .. tight e-lines .. heheh ..

[*Statistik*]

IF ANYONE steps up their guts to face me right now right here let me know..im heat up on fiah..

[azn_r4pf4n]

IF ANYONE steps up their guts to face me right now right here let me know..im heat up on fiah..

*starts laughing*


im glad i dont rap that much here no more.

[*Statistik*]

Yo haters..yo azn rap fan ya..
I know you hated my freestyle rap since the first
so just sit your ass down, watch the monitor and check out my next verse
Pop you with my marines make your body burst
Imma snatch your minerals like a purse
so dont f**k with the kangsta it's a god damn curse
Second verse
u thought last time was bad ,this is worst
its like a curse
unleashing the ghost
spreadin the most
havoc, and destruction
after im finished wit u
you'll beg for tax reduction
theres nothin
that kills me more than u get on AOL thinkin u hard
Its tha Benefit
i got my mack10 bitch taken the hit
im makin u bitches quit
azn dont talk shit bout me no more im bringin u 2 the end

[azn_r4pf4n]

haha. should i?













currently crackalat'n \\
another one of his statements \\
making \\ one of the most silliest moves i've seen \\
please \\ at least i don't make lies like you \\
making funny claims \\
and putting that on your resume \\
when you know you're truely afraid \\
heard if you saw fifty on the street, you would run off dismayed \\
pretty silly you're promoting what should be called a waste \\
better yet, you make hip-hop a disgrace \\



.....






im not freestylin anymore, im just one of them pplz laufin at u cuz of the fact u keep making those "claims" like "fans all over the country"

[*CrackedRearView*]

Never fear azn_rapfan, the real poet's here../
To show all you folks how Tool and Jason should appear../
We've all established that neither kiddy really seems to have a clue../
One's looks like he's about 12, and the other's black n' blue../
From all the verbal beatings I've been givin' and I've dished out../
It's all too clear at this point, CRV's the guy with clout../
These other fools just run their mouths with raps that hardly make sense../
Keep bringin' Michael Jackson into it, like they jump to his defense../
Little Jason did it twice, this dipshit Taki did it too, /
No one cares about this sick ass child molester, why do you?/
I'm sorry that I hurt your feelings and I crushed pride../
But I couldn't just sit here ..... I couldn't let it slide../
I had take the role of bearer of the bad news../
My job is just to bring you kids your needed cues and clues../
It's obvious that Taki's just another worthless e-slob../
And Jason - your raps suck so don't give up your day job./

[azn_r4pf4n]

Never fear azn_rapfan, the real poet's here../

rofl. never fear, haha.

It's obvious that Taki's just another worthless e-slob../
And Jason - your raps suck so don't give up your day job./

haha

[Rachel]

Jason
Your azn
Shut up
Now

[*Statistik*]

yo im gettin in the game
dont bother joining, itll put you in shame
even if you do, ill finish off you
these things are going through my head
better think about what i just said
this rap battles no contest
you diss me and youll end up in a mess
your gonna wish you neva even started
cuz in the end, youll just be retarded
come on now just admit defeat
you know you cant eva compete
now im gonna stay till the end
come on suckas, go tell ya lovers and friends

[*CrackedRearView*]

Jesus Christ, kid. You're so stupid...

[*Statistik*]

^got damn u callin me a kid? stfu man and give rap up. u nothing and ur worse than j-kwon

[azn_r4pf4n]

yo im gettin in the game
dont bother joining, itll put you in shame
even if you do, ill finish off you
these things are going through my head
better think about what i just said
this rap battles no contest
you diss me and youll end up in a mess
your gonna wish you neva even started
cuz in the end, youll just be retarded
come on now just admit defeat
you know you cant eva compete
now im gonna stay till the end
come on suckas, go tell ya lovers and  friends

wow... lets quote rhymes.

yo im gettin in the game
dont bother joining, itll put you in shame

hmm, doesn't really feel like it.

even if you do, ill finish off you
these things are going through my head

doesn't seem like anybody is finishing.

come on now just admit defeat
you know you cant eva compete

shut up.


to start with the criticism, if ur gonna freestyle, don't say "you know" or even assume. use facts at least to support your opinion. it's shocking u keep saying stuff like for example:

cuz in the end, youll just be retarded

gimme facts buddy. this doesn't seem obvious enough.

Keep bringin' Michael Jackson into it, like they jump to his defense../
Little Jason did it twice, this dipshit Taki did it too, /

at least he brung facts.


please give us facts to at least battle somebody good if its not that obvious of a diss. thank you.


- Francis

[me1issaaaa]

Wow. This is very entertaining.
And I'd have to agree with Justin on this one.
And that Jason kid....... exactly how old are you?
Wow. Just wow.

[Nugget]

^got damn u callin me a kid? stfu man and give rap up. u nothing and ur worse than j-kwon

haha honey no. . U give up rap..his betta then urs..heck WAY betta. and umm u R a kid..so dont tell lies...

i have to say im liking CrackedRearView..

umm jason..u are pathetic..i guess u started to 'Rap' about CRV because u wana get some attention and get some game..honey..no..please..stop..and u cant dress 'gangsta' wut so ever..i mean LOOK at you..even I can dress 'gangsta'

please

[*CrackedRearView*]

The difference between you and J-Kwon is that HE has a record deal.

[jnukes]

lets finish off jason ..


man your rhymes are so wack, they make no sense//
your raps cost as much as yo "man", 50 cents//
i'll tell you right now, you're a disgrace to asians//
this aint no "nightmare4taki" this is "nightmare4jason"//
in your pic in your sig you look like a nerd with glasses//
you a hustla ? i bet you haven't gotten ANY asses //
your avatar dared me to poke you, i did with my rhymes//
in fact, i poked you 61992 times //
add up your dirtiness in your rhymes, about 4 pages//
mine are clean and STILL kill and for all ages//
so i'ma end this right here, jason you're no competition//
you must be uptight like my butthole in this position//

[*CrackedRearView*]

i'll tell you right now, you're a disgrace to asians//
this aint no "nightmare4taki" this is "nightmare4jason"//

DAMN.

[WTFwasIthinking]

LMFAOOOOO............ BOTH OF YOU ARE WACK... YOU ARE WHAT KANYE WAS TALKING ABOUT IN "WACK NIGGAS"....

definitely... these cats are seriously pathetic.... learn to rhyme or don't do it at all... ya'll embarrassin' ya'll selves

f**kin' idiots... and why is this called "freestyle"??? umm... these are all writtens... learn what a f**kin' freestyle is before you attempt to call somethin' a freestyle...

ALL of ya'll are wack... lmfao

AND I'M OUT!

[Rachel]

man your rhymes are so wack, they make no sense//
your raps cost as much as yo "man", 50 cents//
i'll tell you right now, you're a disgrace to asians//
this aint no "nightmare4taki" this is "nightmare4jason"//
in your pic in your sig you look like a nerd with glasses//
you a hustla ? i bet you've gotten NO asses //
your avatar dared me to poke you, i did with my rhymes//
in fact, i poked you 61992 times //
add up your dirtiness in your rhymes, about 4 pages//
mine are clean and STILL kill and for all ages//
so i'ma end this right here, jason you're no competition//
you must be uptight like my butthole  in this position//

shit jason, your ass got told!

[*nightmare4taki*]

Let me adminster the final dose of ether/
If you dont like what im saying chances are you want like this either/
Let me give you a little rhthymatic illmatic verse/
I cant help it that i was born with the quintessence curse/
Jason im defacing and replacing you/
I thought i told you that pastor mason wouldnt have a chance of saving you/
Oh yeah and CRV i quoted your sh*t that was writtin/
I know the truth be hurtin you when i start spittin/
Your a homo dont worry as long as you do what i say i want tell/
Now thats the true definition of blackmail/
ANd Jason your nothing but a kindergarden drop out/
Tell me Why does 50 ride around in a bulletproof car if he has to hop out/
If you want to take this to school i get a plus you get a minus/
From now on CRV and Jason adress me as your hinus/
I got the speakers blasting outlasting all competition if thats what you really want to call it/
I make your suburban start swervin like a alchoholic/
Neither one of yall really want it/
You two keep steppin to me and get burned like chronic/
My freedom of speach is because of the first ammendment/
I really hope you two dont get offended/
SO CRV there is no need to hate/
This is manslaughter so We dont even need a judge to adjudicate/

[uLoVeMikeRoch]

Jesus you guys both suck,
and jason you give kangstas like me a bad name man...

[uLoVeMikeRoch]

Jason
Your azn
Shut up
Now

Sorry for the double post...

But whoa whoa whoa, whats that supposed to mean?
Is that a F*CKING RACIST COMMENT, because i am THIS CLOSE TO F*CKING GETTING PISSED.

[*CrackedRearView*]

Aight Tool, now let us do a little rundown../
You'z still dumb, you still suck, and now you bring the fun down?/
Fun's down cause now you'z startin' to rap like little Jason../
Must be because your preoccupation with d**k chasin'../
I know you chase dicks cause 'homo's all you've called me../
Man you talk about fags a lot, this gay shit's gonna stall me../
I don't know if I should bring myself around you anymore../
Don't want you grabbin' on my balls in the midst of verbal war../
I just don't swing that way Taki, and I'm sorry, find another../
Maybe you could try your dad? Maybe you could ask your brother?/
And way to butcher English language, you 'quintessence' of a fool../
Know the meaning of a word before you use it in a duel../
What's sad is now you've hit rock-bottom and you can't even rhyme../
So this time I'ma just convict you of your lyrical crime../
You've got the right to remain silent for the rest of the night../
Cause try'na rhyme 'want it' and 'chronic'..man it just ain't right../
Same goes for 'call it'/'alcoholic', 'amendment'/'offended'../
Obviously what little rhyming skill you had before has ended../
So one more time, man, why you here? What'chu think you gotta prove?/
If you can't rhyme with the big dogs then I just suggest you move../

[*nightmare4taki*]

Heere is a little sequal/
It is clear to see that we were not created equal/
Let me go ahead and finish you fast/
SInce its apparent you have your foot stuck up your ass/
Im black and your girl do me right/
THen be like damn how your kids so white/
Im cold blooded/
You either hate it or love it/
Im the betterman half pass a veterman how can you blame me/
Lyrically kill ya and have jason give you triple bypass like d**k chaney/
Chaos is what i cause Havoc is what i live/
CRV you dont have no d*ck or balls, Sorry ladies he has nothing to give/
I raise the roth to the atmosphere and bring it back to the surface/
CRV you the type to go to jail and drop the soap on purpose/
Your a little schizo with the pen man/
This guys taking up for michael cuz he use to take trips to neverland/
Its no wonder my flow is to massive/
Im just to much to touch im active your passive/
F*cking with me will leave you with a cracked dome/
Dont take your animosity out on me because your having problems at home/














your the dumass you dont know what quintessence mean. THat why im above your comprehension.

quintessence- the essence of something in its purest form

what i mean was i was have the gift and the curse
now go shoot yourself lol