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 Feb 28 2005, 05:37 PM
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 Another ditch in the road... you keep moving  Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152  |
enchantment
bewitchment and trickment or treatment for the sickness and the weakness and the selfless and the crying those who know us say we're lost as we've no homes but we know that we live on the wind |
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Mar 1 2005, 12:11 PM
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 Handclaps please Group: Member Posts: 503 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 26,359 |
I really like it. It really focuses on the change in life (at least I think so). Nice job!
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Mar 1 2005, 07:55 PM
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kind of simple but i like it, especially the beginning. keep it up.
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Mar 1 2005, 09:53 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Yes..tis simple. But I like it. I didn't know you wrote..but then agian..I haven't been here in a while >.<
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Mar 3 2005, 12:06 AM
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Hm, I like your ending, and the verses are put together well, I too don't get what you're trying to get at but maybe this was one of those spur of the moment pieces, tell me if I'm wrong but haha but it's good nonetheless
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Mar 3 2005, 11:47 AM
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Another ditch in the road... you keep moving Group: Member Posts: 6,281 Joined: Jan 2005 Member No: 85,152 |
its about feeling lost, but people trying to cure you when they dont really know.care what's actually wrong.
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Mar 3 2005, 03:28 PM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
QUOTE(MarchHare2UrAlice @ Feb 28 2005, 5:37 PM) we live on the wind  If all you had said was that I would still have been left with a smile. |
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Mar 3 2005, 08:26 PM
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 Seien Sie bitte mein Geliebter! Group: Member Posts: 660 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,436 |
*Gasps! So simple. Yet so true. I like it muchly.
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