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Sonnets, written by me
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post Feb 1 2005, 04:46 PM
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Sonnet to Beauty

Beauty, Beauty, blushing beauty,
Give me a taste of your tenderness,
Whisper your forbidden softly,
And ease my empty loneliness.
Beauty, your eyes remain closed,
And your heart is still your own,
All around you: they supposed,
They could not leave your innocence alone.
Beauty, you are such divine,
Cupid shoots almost all his arrows,
But sleep is your sweet decline,
Such slumber would so narrow.
Your two stars do not shine,
In that, nobody is mine.

Inspired by: The Sleeping Beauty Trilogy written by Anne Rice


Sonnet to Whom I Shall Never Reveal

This is to whom I shall never reveal:
Nor speak my heart directly,
It did begin with some appeal,
Tongue-tied, spoke uncorrectly.
So, now instead of being meek,
I'll tell of what you wished to know,
Rip open my heart, let it leak,
Let my true self show.
We cannot be in love,
It's all infatuation,
But of all the things I think of,
Could it be that sensation?
I wanted to tell you that I love you,
But eventually, this love is not true.

Inspired by: The guy I like


Sonnet to a Black Rose

Bittersweet, unordinary, grown out of blood,
You are deceptive, as everyone cannot see,
But I understand that you are muddled with mud,
And what you contain holds far more beauty.
A vampire's footsteps could only be your growth,
To walk across a mortal land,
They do not know whether to hate or loathe,
But, you, I only half understand.
Inside the petals, a war will continue;
Vindicated by your dreary color,
Such loneliness, nobody can touch you,
You will never have a lover.
Sweet rejection, you are only alone.
Solitude, your soulmate, is all you own.

Inspired by: My own interests in vampires
 
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post Feb 1 2005, 05:13 PM
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wow very creative indeed biggrin.gif i like your style of writing especially the 2nd one wub.gif good job
 
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post Feb 1 2005, 07:08 PM
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wow those are great...i like sonnets and yours are so well written. awesome job. thumbsup.gif
 
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post Feb 2 2005, 06:48 PM
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these are very good, though i think sonnets have 10 syllables to a line, but nobody follows the rules anymore anyways. (and vampires are so awesome.)
 

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