you make me wanna- please comment back thanks :) |
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 Jan 24 2005, 07:50 PM
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 To Live is to Dance  Group: Member Posts: 791 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 70,074  |
I wrote this in HS(when i was 17 i think) anyways i'm 22 now..so yeah lol its really old
here it is i havent even edited either i found it a while ago. You make me wanna by Marcy you make me wanna break some glass you make me wanna punch my fist into the wall, while i stare and watch it turn black and blue. you make me wanna say "f**k you" you make me wanna start a fight, kick everyones ass and run and hide sometimes i hate you, sometimes i wanna hurt you. but then i realize how would i feel afterwards, i will just feel empty inside without you. i wanna scream. its as if i need you, want you its as if you are my every desire why do you have this spell on me its like a rush, a rush for love its like a feeling, i never had before but then, but then i grow more and more and then i wanna scream, punch, hit say your name out loud, i wanna hit punch say your name out loud. i want the pass i dont want the future anymore, i wanna go back. you make me wanna say f**k you. you make me wanna say i love you. you make me wanna go crazy...... the end so yeah thats it lol i know its not that great but its okay i suppose :) |
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| *wind&fire* |
Jan 24 2005, 10:37 PM
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youre 22?!?!
you need to make it flow more... |
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Jan 24 2005, 10:44 PM
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To Live is to Dance Group: Member Posts: 791 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 70,074 |
QUOTE(AzNbUbZ @ Jan 24 2005, 10:37 PM) youre 22?!?! you need to make it flow more...  yeah i am LOL ooo yeah i'm bad at flowing......erm i'm not that great at writting i just write for whatever ..lol mostly when i'm bored.. |
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Jan 24 2005, 10:48 PM
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i try to ...its a good way to express yourself...
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Jan 25 2005, 08:02 AM
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 WANTED..for sexyness Group: Member Posts: 1,050 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 77,290 |
i think its good. awsome job.
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