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 Jan 22 2005, 05:44 PM
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You say you don't hate me
But that doesn't mean anything Nothing is like it used to be Everything is drifting away You tell me it will all be alright That everything will turn out ok And it will all be happy in the end But I don't believe you You say that you have Experienced everything possible And you know how it will end But you aren't anywhere close You say not to be sad But I'm not sad Sad is a wasted emotion I'm just not there, like a ghost You say that you know how it feels But thats a lie You don't know how it feels to not feel anymore To be completely numb You dont know how it feels To see the person that you Gave your heart and soul to Floating lifeless in a lake You dont know what its like To see your best friend The person that you are closest to Hanging limp from a rafter You say it will all be perfect That everything turns out all right in the end That all these horrible emotions will fade But you lied |
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Jan 22 2005, 07:00 PM
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ok, that hurt my feelings. that's how well i can relate to it. ow. you ruined my day. naah, you didn't ruin my day, but it's good. keep it up.
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Jan 22 2005, 07:02 PM
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thank you.
hah this is actually meant towards my ex boyfriend... |
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Jan 22 2005, 07:08 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
i was thinking of my ex telling me that. that's probably why it hurt so much.
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Feb 4 2005, 07:52 PM
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wow i love your poems. they are so deep, meaningful and they flow too. kept on the lovely work! |
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Feb 4 2005, 07:53 PM
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that's really good. deep and meaningful. i like
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Feb 5 2005, 04:48 PM
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wow thats great. lovely words, i must say.
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Feb 5 2005, 05:54 PM
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I can soooo relate to this one! <3
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Feb 6 2005, 12:27 AM
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It's beautiful, excellent word choice. You paint a somber and almost morbid picture, which makes me like it even more.
¬ to intrude but have the events that you talk about in your poem actually happened?.. Don't feel inclined to tell me, after all I'm only a lowly newbie with 100 posts to her name  . Take care
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Feb 6 2005, 11:16 AM
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QUOTE(actionrobot_go @ Feb 6 2005, 12:27 AM) It's beautiful, excellent word choice. You paint a somber and almost morbid picture, which makes me like it even more. ¬ to intrude but have the events that you talk about in your poem actually happened?.. Don't feel inclined to tell me, after all I'm only a lowly newbie with 100 posts to her name . Take care yeah they have. and thank you everyone |
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