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 Jan 17 2005, 09:04 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time  Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705  |
You think you know how it feels
To face everyday with a forced smile Expecting your so called friends to believe you And they do every once in a while And you think you know how to live my life So Why Don't You Try being the smile on my face Try being these thoughts that won't erase Try being this blade on my wrist Try feeling the anger of my fist These lonely and mournful hours Of the nights that are so surrealistic I can't bear anymore of this suffering My mind has become afflictic And you think you can survive this life So Why Don't You Try being the smile on my face Try being these thoughts that won't erase Try being this blade on my wrist Imagine the anger of my fist DO YOU FEEL IT YET? Try feeling all of this pain Try running through my hollow veins Try seeing through these eyes Try listening to all the lies Try being me and maybe you'll see Why I don't give a f**k what you think about me. |
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Jan 18 2005, 02:55 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Wow, that was really good
 I especially liked this part............."Try being the smile on my face Try being these thoughts that won't erase Try being this blade on my wrist Imagine the anger of my fist DO YOU FEEL IT YET? Try feeling all of this pain Try running through my hollow veins Try seeing through these eyes Try listening to all the lies Try being me and maybe you'll see Why I don't give a f**k what you think about me. " nice Keep em coming
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Jan 18 2005, 10:52 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
dayum! i know you don't like me using slang, but i can't think of a better word to describe that than HARD. put it to some double bass and some thrashing and you have an EFFign hammer to the face! peace
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Jan 20 2005, 08:14 PM
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i really like this one. i can relate. very nicely done!
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Jan 20 2005, 11:57 PM
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 Prez of Student Council 04/05 Group: Member Posts: 2,888 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 851 |
that really nice =0
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Jan 21 2005, 12:04 AM
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 none of it seems real Group: Member Posts: 2,469 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 73,889 |
I really love that.
I also LOVE LOVE LOVE your signature. |
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Jan 21 2005, 06:29 PM
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Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
QUOTE(say_what_you_mean @ Jan 21 2005, 12:04 AM) I really love that. I also LOVE LOVE LOVE your signature.  Why thank you ^^ And THANK THANK THANK YOU again. |
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