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 Jan 17 2005, 02:10 PM
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 i am a liar  Group: Member Posts: 69 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 77,216  |
i want
cool fall nights; the soggy leaves painted redgoldbrown and smoky night fires and the tingle of light breezes. i want to walk through these back alleys that are backlit by fluorescent orange manmade constellations i want to walk with your hand in mine. i want wet streets and leaves that dance with interlocked hands, falling calmly in the calm fall, and silent, silent nights. |
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Jan 18 2005, 02:56 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
that was awesome
 your words and your style is very unique, and i like it! Keep it up!
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Jan 18 2005, 09:57 AM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
wow that was amazingly beautiful!! hehe while i was reading your poem, i was imagining me in that poem. felt so refeshing i have to say that hehe. sound so breezy and very warmy ^___^;; great job!!!
 i'll give you 100000000000000000000000/10 cause it's really good!
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Jan 18 2005, 10:57 AM
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 LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
i give props to you for using the word "soggy". hehe. i like it. it's very romantic and visual. and i relate to it, somewhat. i'm also kind of inspired to write a somber, quiet song of my own, now. nice work!
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