A poem my friend wrote |
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 Jan 2 2005, 03:59 PM
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I am
I am life I am the spark in a touch between flesh and blood I am I am the loving caress between two young souls yearning for affection I am I am the power of graditude from master to apprenice I am I am the pain of an unwanted feeling The depresion that comes with I am love I am hate I am unwanted I am beginnings I am andings I am well I just am. |
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Jan 3 2005, 12:37 AM
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 oh sweet pestilence Group: Member Posts: 2,251 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,876 |
I think she said, "I am" too many times. Just my opinion though
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Jan 3 2005, 06:08 PM
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 SCHGEB!SCHGEB! Group: Member Posts: 1,786 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,217 |
QUOTE(RandomHero @ Jan 3 2005, 12:37 AM) I think she said, "I am" too many times. Just my opinion though  yeah definatly, i got sick of reading those two words.. |
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