the day, it's a b-day poem i wrote for my sister. |
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| *not_your_average* |
 Dec 24 2004, 04:23 PM
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OK, this is a b-day poem for my sister, even though it was on the 5th.
 But anyways, here it is. The Day Today is the day, Your birthday, YAY! But before that day, I have something to say. Make it fun, make it lively, Make it great, make it exciting. Make it memorable most of all, Make it amazing, wherever you are. Today is a special day, Where we get along, always. So, please, remember this, I love you, dear sis! I thought the ending was kinda corny, but please, post for some feedback! |
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Dec 24 2004, 06:54 PM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
I like it. It's very lively. Good Job
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Dec 24 2004, 10:14 PM
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 thanks!
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Dec 25 2004, 04:01 PM
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 hopeless dreamer Group: Member Posts: 11 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 74,549 |
aww, that is sweet xD
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