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 Dec 18 2004, 10:52 PM
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a break-up song. enjoy.
IMMATURE, CHILDISH, FICKLE WENCH The only thing I regret Was caring so much For am IMMATURE, CHILDISH FICKLE WENCH LIKE YOU! I treated you Like a goddess I gave you gold You gave me shit You broke my heart I dealt with it Your negligence Made me perfect! With every passing day I question what I ever saw I am amazed It could ever last this long Won’t put up with anymore Of your wrong doing i know i'm worthless But you’re still not good enough for me I pledged my love You played your games I kept you warm You left me in the rain You told me lies I told nothing but truth Proof positive I am too good for you With every passing day I question what I ever saw I am amazed It could ever last this long Won’t put up with anymore Of your wrong doing i know i'm worthless But you’re still not good enough for me The only thing I regret Was caring so much For am IMMATURE, CHILDISH FICKLE WENCH LIKE YOU! Reject me now Commence the dup Think about it Grow the f**k up! Watching you fall Into your slump Remember me And how you f**ked up With every passing day I question what I ever saw I am amazed It could ever last this long Won’t put up with anymore Of your wrong doing I know i'm worthless But you’re still not good enough for me The only thing I regret Was caring so much For am IMMATURE, CHILDISH FICKLE WENCH LIKE YOU! |
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| *Kathleen* |
Dec 18 2004, 10:59 PM
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Haha. 'Fickle wench' describes her well.
 Good job, Lunchbox. As always. 
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Dec 18 2004, 11:28 PM
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 define our lives for us. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
What in the world is a "Fickle wench"?
and.. you must be heartbroken, huh? |
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Dec 18 2004, 11:36 PM
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 Canadian Boyfriend, I think it's time Group: Member Posts: 450 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,705 |
Wow. No idea what a 'fickle winch' is...but that is an amazing poem. I really like it. It is funny yet it makes a point. Good job.
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Dec 18 2004, 11:54 PM
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LunchboxXx Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810 |
fickle- undecidable. doesn't know what he/she wants.
wench- derogitory term for a female, such as "bitch" |
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Dec 20 2004, 04:06 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
fickle wench...sounds interesting. good poem though!
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Dec 21 2004, 12:51 AM
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Nice poem! Really...hateful. I love it!
I know what it means, but somehow fickle wench makes me think of different brands of pickles... 
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Dec 21 2004, 03:21 AM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
that's so true, but it reminds me of that song by puddle of mud that sounds like nirvana. She f**king Hates me.
Met a girl, thought she was grand fell in love, found out first hand went well, for a week or two then it all, came unglued you get the picture from 1-10 N/A |
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Dec 21 2004, 07:06 PM
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haha, thats hilarouis, nice poem ! keep it up !
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Dec 22 2004, 02:11 PM
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 Crying Behind Blind Eyes Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 7,967 |
I honestly loved it. Fickle wench.
QUOTE Reject me now Commence the dup Think about it Grow the f**k up! Watching you fall Into your slump Remember me And how you f**ked up That's my favorite part. |
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| *not_your_average* |
Dec 23 2004, 04:34 PM
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That's cool, nice "rant" feel to it.
It weirdly sounds like a Shel Silverstein poem to me, though...  Could be the title.
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| *wind&fire* |
Dec 23 2004, 08:54 PM
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right wheres that whore.. lets bitch slap her...
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Dec 24 2004, 02:35 AM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
Wow, this is awesome.. as always. =]
Great job, Lunchbox. :] |
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