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second heartbeat
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Dec 16 2004, 09:15 AM
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verse 1
Gone...
We keep writing, talking and planning, but everything's changing.
We all know what to do but know one does it.
Now this time has passed and full of regret.
Two in my heart have left me a while, I stand alone.
When they get back, it won't be the same.
My life, you've always been there.
Now you're gone and my heads spinning.
Left the childhood, left the memories, left the good times in the past.
Moving on your time has run out.
Wishing the clock would stand still, the world can wait.
Wasting away once again, once lived as friends.

chorus
As time passes by, regrets for the rest of my life.
The ones who I confide were gone in the black of the night.

verse2
Never will I forget you, and all the memories past.
So rarely I get to see your face.
Growing I looked to you in guidance.
We knew that time would kill us, but you're still so close to me.

To me you were my life.
To me you were my soul companion.
Now you are so far away.
Nothing can take away the time and the memories we had.
Come back - to the days when we were young
Come back - to the days when nothing mattered

chorus
 
rainnydaiis
post Dec 16 2004, 08:39 PM
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Hmm interesting how you wrote it.. But to me the theme is very unclear
 
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post Dec 16 2004, 09:02 PM
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always a critic lol
 
Ekay
post Dec 16 2004, 09:17 PM
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Ya kno, I haven't seen you guys around lately. Welcome back. And about the poem..It's a little unclear like he said.
 
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post Dec 16 2004, 11:04 PM
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oops a little mistake i dunno if it helps but its a song so i labeled the verse and the chorus srry lol
 
Ekay
post Dec 17 2004, 12:34 AM
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Oh well in that case. It makes more sense than before.
 
angel-roh
post Dec 18 2004, 12:21 PM
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oooh someones gone in your vaccant spot? sad...but anyways nice lyric. you wrote this? heh i dont know y it should call a second heartbeat but um... change the lyric title? How about "the last heartbeat"? anyways nice lyric =]
 

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