Let's Make a Story-Part 3, XD |
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 Dec 13 2004, 07:50 PM
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 I can rot your brain ;]  Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,160 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,261  |
Hahaha! You should all go back to read part 2. It was ...wow, very interesting. Someone even included *cough* jellyfish romance. :O
Instructions from other thread: Ok, so this is what you do. You have a story, that you adapt from what the person above you posts. But don't look at the beginning because that will ruin the fun. Anywhoo, if you're lazy like me, you probably won't read through each post (and that's a good thing for this story making thing...*cough* although I do try to read previous posts when I can *cough*). SO BASICALLY: Add two or three sentences from what the person above you had posted. Like add on to the story. I will finally compile everything up when someone finally concludes the story (when it gets too long), and then I will start another story up. First person to post...start it off. :D |
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Dec 14 2004, 02:03 AM
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 Bardic Nation Group: Member Posts: 1,113 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 38,059 |
The rains poured down upon the street as mary read to her child with frozen feet. Her mind had been set upon the tasks before her, but then the thoughts whispered into her ear had taken over her. She set off to her first job at the pub.
She found a man who needn't know her name and they came to a room where she proceeded to begin earning her keep. |
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Dec 14 2004, 10:27 AM
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 fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
Her eyes focused on a tile in the cieling as she commited to her job. It was crooked.... She closed her eyes as tears started to form. Determined not to let the bastard see her cry, she took a deep breath. He assumed it was natural. He stuffed the money down her shirt and slapped her buttox as he disappeared from the room. She left too, and exited the pub. She hailed a cab.
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Dec 14 2004, 07:09 PM
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 define our lives for us. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 11,656 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 43,293 |
"Please, sir, take me back to my home" mary [that is her name, right?] sighed. she knew this had been a hard day at work.
ah, well, another day is another day, mary thought to herself. then the cab driver stopped halfway to mary's house. the cab had no face on, no reaction, no voice. "what happened?" mary asked the cab driver. |
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Dec 14 2004, 07:51 PM
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 Dark Lord of McCandless Group: Member Posts: 2,226 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,761 |
The cab driver began, "I was once like you... a young, impressionable kid, roaming the mean streets of Philadelphia. It's sad affair really. The city isn't what it used to be. Now, when I was young..."
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Dec 14 2004, 07:58 PM
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I can rot your brain ;] Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 1,160 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 42,261 |
...I roamed the dismal streets and oftentimes found victims in which I placed my sexual desires upon. This urge of mine caused many problems for I had no control over my body. You see, there's more to me than just cab driving. My other occuptation includes..."
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Apr 13 2008, 01:26 PM
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fell in love with a boy Group: Member Posts: 523 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,965 |
(oh. my bad. lolz.)
" -- includes helping young women like yourself find a new way in the world." His eyes focused on mine in the rear view mirror and I felt like he saw me; he saw me for who I really was. A person. My lips parted in a sigh of realization. I spoke the first question on the tip of my tongue, " |
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