another poem..., some1 u hate turns out to be some1 u luv |
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 Dec 12 2004, 10:53 PM
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well this is a poem i wrote... cuz.. a friend told me to write about it.. n so i did....
it kinda has my feelings in it as well.. n kinda runs in my life.. wit my ex.. but its not all true.. heh =/ anyways.here goes wow.. been a while since we talked been while since we fought... i remember the first time we met I remember how it was set We yelled at eachother never knowing one another.. all we do is just yell at eachother we never really cared about eachother time goes by each day i cry I think about the past... i dont know why it just happened so fast... But now i know... So here, ill let it flow... Baby im sry for what i did i was stupid for acting like a kid dont know wat happen to us dont even wanna cuss... So can we start over... I just wanna say this to you and this is all true so here me out.. this is for you Baby.. i love you.... -Vincent Huynh Wynn tell me wat u guys think.. Thanks |
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| *Kathleen* |
Dec 13 2004, 05:18 PM
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Is this true? Haha. Usually when I show people I dislike them, I never look back and neither do they.
 Nonetheless, it's good.
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Dec 14 2004, 12:31 AM
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Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 293 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,801 |
well.. iono if i love her... anymore.. heh cuz of wat she did to me... n stuff.. =/
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Dec 15 2004, 02:06 PM
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 i'm susan Group: Official Member Posts: 13,875 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 5,029 |
yelling and screaming---one word...ouch.
anyways your poem sounded like "right here with me" by JS. it's a song just to let you know that. but sort of different cause they dont mention the yellin' and screaming lol but anyways nice poem =] wait you love her but you dont know you love her? O_O;;;;;;;;;;; |
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