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ryfitaDF
post Dec 7 2004, 07:30 PM
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the world really needs to end soon. humanity has been EFFing things up for far too long now. i wrote a thrash metal song about it. enjoy.

GENOCIDE
I give up on human kind
They’re all a f**king waste of time
The only thing they do is waste
Blades will trace a bleeding line
No heaven, hell, or god divine
Just genocide with brutal haste
Global warming would be nice
The four horsemen would suffice
Media sell suicide
Hope no one will intervene
All and all, by any means
I just what this world to f**king die

Extinction of the hairless ape
Reprisal for the earth it rapes
With ignorance and hypocrisy
Their judgment on the gays and jews
Exploit the things we keep taboo
Inspire my misanthropy
A real independence day
Or deep impact with tidal waves
Or the Myans in two-thousand twelve
The return of Jesus Christ
Is a worthy sacrifice
To see it die I'll gladly burn in hell!
 
*Kathleen*
post Dec 7 2004, 07:43 PM
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That's the way to think, Lunchbox. wink.gif
 
ComradeRed
post Dec 7 2004, 08:58 PM
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How...angsty. I should write a happy poem later. ^_^. Cheer up.
 
sikdragon
post Dec 8 2004, 12:02 AM
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Wow no offense to the females but that sounds so weak. I mean if you meant that you must be a P**sy*no offense to the women*. I mean wow, you make little girls seem masculine. Not to mention your gross interpretation on worldly events and the world's peoples. Induced state of thinking certainly isn't your strong point.

But, yeah that sounds like thrash. Make it longer because if you want a decent pace you gotta have somewhere to go. Those stanzas just wouldn't sound good repeated as they are now. Maybe if you broke them up and expanded and made it more graphic. F*ck*n-A tho right?
 

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