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 Dec 7 2004, 10:58 AM
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 LunchboxXx  Group: Member Posts: 1,789 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,810  |
i've always wanted to write a suicide note, but i've never really fealt the need to kill myself, so i'm writing a fake one! if you don't want to read some sappy depressed nonsense then go away.
it's blistering how things turn out. things are achieved only to be lost, or worse, be taken from you. one day you're in rapture, the next, jealous fate rips it away. in my case, it was slowly peeled off and seemed to be enjoyed by whoever the culprit may be. it is never torn off completely, though. you're always left with a ligiment of that joy left on you that you obcess over. you love and cherish and search, no, panic over ways to rebuild it. then that day comes when you finally take the saw and amputate. i've become a pro at this, but this time it's different. she was malignant. she is gone but still inside of me. she leaves me weak and powerless. i see her face in every natural feature, her her voive and every song, and feel her warmth in every dream, only to have cruel relaity pull it away like a steak to a starving dog. i've attempted to move on, the memories not far behind me. tormenting me. harassing me. pulling me back. religion has failed. love has failed, family has failed, government has failed, everything had failed and bliss is dead. corruption reigns in this vile kingdom of the living, and this blade it the compass fot my exodus. i lack a future and i hate my past. time to make all well again. to all who care, i love you and i am awaiting your company wherever death leads us. until then, farewell. |
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Dec 11 2004, 04:51 AM
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 Yawn Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 9,530 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 65,772 |
Wow thats really good, for a suicide note lol. Uh but please don't actually USE it. lol cuz that would be really depressing
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Dec 11 2004, 08:15 PM
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MCMXC a. D. Group: Member Posts: 106 Joined: Dec 2004 Member No: 69,715 |
QUOTE(ryfitaDF @ Dec 7 2004, 10:58 AM) i've always wanted to write a suicide note, but i've never really fealt the need to kill myself, so i'm writing a fake one! if you don't want to read some sappy depressed nonsense then go away. it's blistering how things turn out. things are achieved only to be lost, or worse, be taken from you. one day you're in rapture, the next, jealous fate rips it away. in my case, it was slowly peeled off and seemed to be enjoyed by whoever the culprit may be. it is never torn off completely, though. you're always left with a ligiment of that joy left on you that you obcess over. you love and cherish and search, no, panic over ways to rebuild it. then that day comes when you finally take the saw and amputate. i've become a pro at this, but this time it's different. she was malignant. she is gone but still inside of me. she leaves me weak and powerless. i see her face in every natural feature, her her voive and every song, and feel her warmth in every dream, only to have cruel relaity pull it away like a steak to a starving dog. i've attempted to move on, the memories not far behind me. tormenting me. harassing me. pulling me back. religion has failed. love has failed, family has failed, government has failed, everything had failed and bliss is dead. corruption reigns in this vile kingdom of the living, and this blade it the compass fot my exodus. i lack a future and i hate my past. time to make all well again. to all who care, i love you and i am awaiting your company wherever death leads us. until then, farewell. Even if you are 'mock'ing.. go out in style. Use some grammar. Oh.. and sorry. Just.. how you started.. it lost me. I will think of one, and then post it. This just lost my interest to read, right off the bat. The point of writing a 'suicide' note is to show your life sucked, and there was no 'bliss' what so ever. |
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Dec 11 2004, 08:22 PM
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 Junkie's Running Dry Group: Member Posts: 317 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 34,797 |
Is writing a suicide note suddenly cool? I fear for our world.
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Dec 12 2004, 03:34 AM
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Brie Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 10,172 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 20,548 |
That's awesome.
Really, it is. |
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Dec 16 2004, 11:02 AM
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that is very well written!! i love it!! good job!!
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