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Well...i just started on Wednesday I've written 5 poems, all about my close friend/crush. I just found this part of CB so I'm just gonna post all my poems and see what you guys think about them. Some have titles, some don't, so please help with that.
----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- JUST FRIENDS Even though I know were just friends, My thoughts for you just never end. Even though I see you as a sister, I can't help but see your beautiful eyes glister. Your in my dreams and everywhere, I see you everywhere I stare. You said yourself we're only friends, But my thoughts for you just never end. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- YOU'RE ALWAYS ON MY MIND Elaine, you're just always on my mind. In my mind you're always enshrined. I know sometimes i call you slow, But my thoughts for you are something I just can't outgrow. I think about you day and night. When you're in my dreams it makes me happy and bright. I wish there was one single way, I could get you by my side to stay. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Untitled1 No matter what i ever do, i just can't help but think about you. No matter where I ever go, My feelings for you are just so mellow. Maybe its the way you smile, Maybe its your beutiful hairstyle, Maybe its your pretty face, Or the way you just walk in grace. I never thought I was able to, Feel the way I do for you. Even though I like you than more than just friends, I don't want our friendship to ever end. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Untitled2 I never thought it wat possible, to feel this way for a girl. And even though we're only friends, I just wanna buy you millions of pearls. And though you're with that other guy, My feelings for you don't stop. And though I love you as a friend, My thoughts for you are just nonstop. I just want you to know, I really really like you. But I cherish our friendship more, But if it was lost I would be so blue. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Untitled3 I really like you Elaine. When you're around you I go insane. I have that feeling that you're the one, When your face just luminates like the sun. I think about you day and night. I wish that I could hold you tight. And when on AIM I talk to you, I'm careful on what I say and do. Sometimes I wish that you were mine, The one I could be with for all time. No matter what I say or do, I just can't seem to get with you. ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Please excuse me if any of the words are spelled wrong. These are the first 5 and only poems I've ever written...so cut me some slack please...lol (and I'm only 12 so...) Any comments welcome! Terrence |
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