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 Nov 20 2004, 02:02 PM
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 hi, my name is brianna! =]  Group: Official Member Posts: 5,764 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,114  |
Love at first sight
Your face is so sweet, So simple yet serene, I wrapped my arms around you, As you gently kissed my cheek, Was this love at first sight? Could it be that God was right? I kissed your delicious lips As you lifted me up in the air, Life was so sweet, I just couldn’t bare, I gazed up at the sunset, The day was about to end, But at least you had mended my heart back together again. |
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Nov 20 2004, 03:31 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer* Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134 |
O_O wow im in love witht his poem very nice i love it!!!! good job
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Nov 21 2004, 12:38 AM
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 jellyfishing, jellyfishing Group: Member Posts: 1,174 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 55,185 |
that's a pretty poem!
 the end really concludes it nicely. keep up the good work! 
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Nov 21 2004, 06:00 PM
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hi, my name is brianna! =] Group: Official Member Posts: 5,764 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 22,114 |
Thanks for the feedback.
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Nov 21 2004, 08:54 PM
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 i've never wanted anything rationale. Group: Staff Alumni Posts: 8,449 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 19,045 |
awww i really like it, it makes me happy inside
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Nov 21 2004, 09:34 PM
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 skaters gonna skate. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,861 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 6,336 |
Beautiful :]
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Nov 22 2004, 01:01 AM
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 I'm Lost In My Own kryptonite Group: Member Posts: 59 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 61,556 |
aww that is soooooooooo sweet! and pretty!
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