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 Nov 20 2004, 12:29 PM
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*Influential Guitarist & Inspiring Writer*  Group: Official Member Posts: 1,217 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,134  |
trapped in the darkness in the corner of your room
memories of your wishes and dreams begin to fade wanting to give up and let everything go but you hold on, becuase there still hope left despite what they say dont let it get to you your more than that, you know it yourself you have a strong heart, dont give it up prove them wrong and give it your all smile now you've become more than what you were built up with confidence and the strength to go on fulfilling your dreams and giving others hope you've become more than a man, you're a hero |
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Nov 25 2004, 12:32 PM
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Ah tis good, well done.
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| *not_your_average* |
Dec 23 2004, 04:15 PM
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whoops, accidentally posted here! (It was a poem about ponchos!)
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| *Azarel* |
Dec 23 2004, 04:17 PM
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^If you want to post your writing, make a new topic instead of posting it in someone else's thread.
"Don't Give Up" sounds vaguely familiar for some reason. Maybe I've read it before. >_> Good writing though. |
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| *T0rmented_Soul* |
Sep 5 2006, 12:40 PM
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This is old. haha one of my non rhyming stuff.
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