Hiding from the truth, please leave comments! |
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 Nov 16 2004, 09:28 PM
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 babygrl23  Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911  |
People think,
There’s something wrong, When she doesn’t talk, Or act along, When she’s quiet, When she doesn’t speak her mind, People worry, They ask her “Are you o.k.?” She always says the same thing, “Yea”, Maybe there IS something wrong, Maybe she just wants to be alone, Maybe she needs to find someone, Who she can trust She’s tired of people worrying, No matter what, She puts on a happy face, She doesn’t know what’s wrong, She just knows she’s never REALLY happy, But when she pretends to be happy, She finds it much easier, To hide from the truth, That is deep inside of her, But at times she feels, As if she could explode, She wants to talk, But finds it much easier, Hiding from the truth. |
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Nov 16 2004, 09:33 PM
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 A.K.A. Simplicityxx Group: Member Posts: 1,878 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,813 |
this is good. I know how it feels.
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Nov 17 2004, 09:52 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
Yeah...it sux(feeling like this)
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Nov 18 2004, 01:15 AM
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 High Voltage!∞ Group: Official Member Posts: 4,728 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 29,157 |
omg! that's an awesome poem, and yeah, it does suck to feel like that
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Nov 19 2004, 10:20 AM
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 and then he died... Group: Member Posts: 338 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,047 |
yup yup
thatz pretty damn tru it is easier nd we all like the easy way out but then it hurts u in the end tsk tsk X |
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Nov 19 2004, 06:42 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
yeah...it hurts big time...
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Nov 19 2004, 09:49 PM
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 xinistical member Group: Member Posts: 123 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,328 |
i feel like the girl in the poem...
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Nov 20 2004, 10:49 AM
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 Stay Cheezin Group: Member Posts: 56 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,829 |
once again your poem has leaped your feelings allowing you to open up ur emotions...I feel everything ur feeling...it's so insightful and really thought provoking like your other poem...
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Nov 21 2004, 01:43 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
Thank you so much!
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Nov 23 2004, 09:33 PM
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catastrophic sweetness Group: Member Posts: 92 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 58,334 |
Oh my how I can relate. Really good though.
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Nov 25 2004, 02:35 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
Thanks!
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Nov 27 2004, 10:30 PM
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 taste this. Group: Member Posts: 102 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 66,751 |
wow that`s really good. and extremely true.. i can totally relate x.x
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Nov 28 2004, 12:09 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
I'm so relieved that I'm not the only one who feels this way...I thought somehthing might be wrong with me...because none of my friends feel this way..
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Nov 29 2004, 03:36 PM
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 Stephanie Group: Member Posts: 127 Joined: Dec 2003 Member No: 47 |
i'm feeling like this right now. thank you for this poem.
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Nov 29 2004, 06:03 PM
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 <3 Group: Member Posts: 3,657 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 64,493 |
sigh so true, i know how it feels
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Nov 29 2004, 10:28 PM
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babygrl23 Group: Member Posts: 88 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 25,911 |
I don't get why my FRIENDS don't understand that I feel this way. Seriously, though, I'm glad I'm not the only one.
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Nov 29 2004, 10:34 PM
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 I'm your worst nightmare... Group: Member Posts: 391 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,600 |
QUOTE(x juicy @ Nov 27 2004, 7:30 PM) wow that`s really good. and extremely true.. i can totally relate x.x i can relate too. thats an awesome poem. seriously. |
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Nov 29 2004, 10:36 PM
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 samurai champloo! Group: Member Posts: 748 Joined: Dec 2003 Member No: 2 |
I can't understand it either.
Your friends are obviously worrying about you and yet you shun them away, saying you can't trust them. It's YOUR choice that you don't trust them, and then you act like they don't understand you. What the hell is there to understand? |
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Dec 8 2004, 05:03 PM
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 my <3 is in Ohio Group: Member Posts: 899 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,599 |
i can relate to that. it sucks to feel that way though....awesome job though
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