"A Comfort Zone", do ya'll like or dislike? |
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 Nov 15 2004, 09:17 PM
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 I'm Lost In My Own kryptonite  Group: Member Posts: 59 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 61,556  |
I wrote this today, just thinking, cause i've been a bit depressed
 about not having a "comfort zone" you know a place that's your comfort wither it be an actual place or a person your dating or just a friend, i just wanted a comfort zone, so i wrote about it...so please tell me what you guys think. Thanks,Love always Keyshia Someplace safe and warm where no worries are born Where everything’s perfect and hearts aren't torn A place of imagination and happy dreams Where horrible monsters are never seen A place filled with love and wonderful things Like the simple joys of childish things The feeling of being in someone's arms And knowing they care Deep in their heart Or feeling a kiss and time stand still Just so you know their love is real Or getting a hug and knowing it's meant Or having a place for anger to vent None of these things are in my home that’s why I need A Comfort zone LeKeyshia Marie Richardson Copyright ©2004 LeKeyshia Marie Richardson |
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Nov 15 2004, 09:55 PM
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 oink Group: Member Posts: 1,099 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,836 |
..wow dats amazing! i love it itso..i dunno how to say ..so real
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Nov 15 2004, 11:58 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
Everybody needs a comfort zone. No matter how odd the place might be. Mine's in the shower
  Anyways good poem. And uhh keep postin` `em up. 
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Nov 17 2004, 04:39 PM
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 RiKACHANtEL Group: Member Posts: 3,876 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 51,230 |
i like it soo much. i feel like that a lot, esp. lately.
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Nov 17 2004, 04:48 PM
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I'm Lost In My Own kryptonite Group: Member Posts: 59 Joined: Nov 2004 Member No: 61,556 |
that's how i feel now. i'm glad ya'll liked it, it means alot when people tell me what they think of what i write.
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