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 Nov 5 2004, 12:58 AM
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Eternal Syn  Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000  |
You should know by now
That I want you happy Even if you aren’t by my side I’d do anything for you As long as I can see you smile The smile that brightens up my day But you know that my feelings are out there And I know you’d rather not be with me But all I ask of you Is to always smile for me ~Nguyen |
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Nov 5 2004, 01:40 AM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
The last line kinda conflicts with the rest of the poem, dontcha think?
I can relate to the author's situation. Short and to the point...Not bad. |
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Nov 5 2004, 07:29 PM
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Eternal Syn Group: Member Posts: 398 Joined: Jun 2004 Member No: 24,000 |
I suppose it does. I'll change it.
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