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 Oct 30 2004, 02:21 PM
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 and they say imitation is flattering  Group: Member Posts: 1,337 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 27,269  |
Never Let Them See You Cry
Vision blurred, water streaming out from my eyes onto the cold, still surface Why do I cry? Complications, complications Never let them see my tears Run to my haven, Its soft embrace, Let my rage and sadness Flow into the pillowcase, Inhale, exhale, shaky breathing, But please don't let them see me cry |
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Oct 31 2004, 10:34 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
It's something different from your usual work.
Nice and short...keep em coming. |
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Nov 1 2004, 03:59 AM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
whoa
for some reason i like this alot the style the vocabulary...i love it...it seems different from every other poem too |
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Nov 1 2004, 09:32 PM
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 dizzy me up. Group: Member Posts: 3,191 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 11,139 |
love it. very deep :]
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