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 Oct 25 2004, 05:08 PM
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Im working on this layout right now (its not done)... this is my second one today... im really sick and have nothing to do... so check it out and tell me what you think!
Jennifer Lopez |
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Oct 25 2004, 05:10 PM
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 Deux Ex Machina Group: Member Posts: 41 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,086 |
The text goes over a little too much to the right. Also, it seems a little simple, like someone had a fun time with the brushes. But since it isn't sompleted, I won't give it a number.
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Oct 25 2004, 05:16 PM
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Its almost done... I know its simple... but its spose to be...
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Oct 25 2004, 05:21 PM
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 "YeHa" is not a foreign policy Group: Member Posts: 290 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 36,192 |
the banner's pretty damn hot. but a few things, as always: your navigation is plain and detracts from the banner; i don't like the background at all--screams '94; i don't like the font you used for your title--should be more varied, more textured/layered/enhanced; it needs to blend on all borders, not just two--while you're at it, i suggest expanding the banner and adding perhaps a third picture or just more peripheral blended images. damn, now that's a tear down. i'm sorry i'm being a bit vague on most things--it's way easier to critique than it is to create. i applaud your efforts and hope you take these things merely as blunt criticism and nothing personal.
hope ya feel better soon :) oh and btw, duchovny is sooo flippin hot! gay or not, that man's got sex appeal. |
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Oct 25 2004, 06:00 PM
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P.S. Group: Member Posts: 453 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,802 |
I just fixed the background it dont look so big and annoying... it should look better now... I didnt know where to put the navigation sorry... maybe ill try something else!
//Edit\\ I moved the navigation... you were right about that... what should I do to fix the other problems? |
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Oct 25 2004, 06:24 PM
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Deux Ex Machina Group: Member Posts: 41 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,086 |
It looks better now!
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Oct 26 2004, 12:30 AM
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 untouchable sakaba Group: Member Posts: 149 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 53,830 |
 pretty good since its not completed yet
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Oct 26 2004, 02:21 PM
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"YeHa" is not a foreign policy Group: Member Posts: 290 Joined: Jul 2004 Member No: 36,192 |
well, for one i don't think you should use butterflies at all--she's wearing angel wings, afterall. your borders should be blended or the banner just needs a frame. that background's gotta go; it's a bad color and it doesn't go with the banner's scheme. the font for your title: less blunt, more creative (try downloading fonts), and a more appealing arrangement (along the bottom of the banner typically works best). youv'e got two beautiful pictures; now all you have to do is make sure they get the externalities they deserve.
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Oct 26 2004, 02:22 PM
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 Yum. =] Group: Member Posts: 888 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 16,139 |
Make the navi a lil darker....Anyway, Jennifer Lopez is fabulous and YOU are fabulous.
I love all your skins. You should submit this to DB. Wait, are you putting in an Info module on this skin?
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Oct 26 2004, 05:24 PM
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 yes. Group: Member Posts: 711 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 37,487 |
cool purple colorz, nice and serenic type look
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Oct 27 2004, 01:32 AM
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 Senior Member Group: Member Posts: 1,239 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,253 |
haha i think you just went a little overboard with the brushes. (butterflies esp.)
sometimes j.lo looks relaly good and sometimes she looks really bad. good for you, you picked good pictures 
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Oct 27 2004, 06:25 PM
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 ©shesdiztinQtive Group: Member Posts: 562 Joined: Oct 2004 Member No: 56,389 |
the image quality is pretty low so if you saved with better quality i'm sure it would look much nicer.
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Oct 27 2004, 10:22 PM
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P.S. Group: Member Posts: 453 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,802 |
Well right now im re-doing it because I guess most of you were right... so I will post a new link!
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Oct 27 2004, 10:28 PM
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questions make me blue. Group: Member Posts: 2,608 Joined: Feb 2004 Member No: 3,796 |
i like it, but the second image of jennifer lopez doesn`t really match. good job, though.
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Oct 27 2004, 11:18 PM
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P.S. Group: Member Posts: 453 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,802 |
I changed it... I fixed everything that I thought was wrong... and I did an image map for the first time in my image ready and the navi is all messed up... can someone tell me why it does that? And does anyone else think the banner is way too small now?
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Oct 29 2004, 03:34 PM
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P.S. Group: Member Posts: 453 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 40,802 |
Or not.....................................
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Oct 29 2004, 06:23 PM
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never saw the old one, but I like this! Its very pretty! And I LOVE the text. The font is just perfect!
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