i knew.., [not the best poem] Options

[lilxroxy]

i knew it all along,
that some day we`ll depart.
still, i hoped you`re the one my heart belongs,
`cause i loved you with all my heart.


i always knw and believed,
loving the ones you love is the happiest sensation.
but pain was all you leave.
I doubted my face isn`t as spotty as a Dalmatian,
for i cried and cried `til Christmas Eve.

I knew it would be hard,
to forget one you once loved so much.
Like running millions of yard,
trying to free myself from pain as such.

I avoided your sweetness,
everyday in 365 days.
Hastily hiding the fact that i`m inlove with your cuteness,
with more than 365 ways.

If the world is really that big,
you seem to lock me in llike an invisible wall,
so i can never find a place to forget you, nor the sweetness of yours like a juicy fig.
If the world is really that small,
how come you can never hear the true words my heart tells?
Like worried about revealing the truth under the synthetic wig.

I knew, knew that one day we`ll smile,
and face each other again.
Even though that relationship between us would be different from before, it would all be worthwhile.
We will appreciate each others presence, and forget the once caused pain.

Because i knew....

[sweetxsimplicity]

Nice poem.
Though it needs a little work, the dalmation part was weird.

[lilxroxy]

yeahup. i knw taht..buh i needed that para badly. thanks for the comment

[TheSilenceInDict...]

Ack, pretty sloppy.
Repetition with 'heart' in the first stanza.
The rhymes throughout the poem are pretty clumsy and disorganized.
I see where you're going with it...some of it isn't half bad.
Hope to see it with more work.