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[dispn0ygonekrazy]

expressing what you feel in words is my only way to tell you about ones life
your thoughts, dreams and your deepest feelings just write them down
pencil and paper is all you need, showing what a great writer you can become
based on the hardships of ones life and the obstacles they face

one great story told in everyones lives and everyones dreams
endless chapters of adventures and never ending conclusions
just like how a fantasy of a story, full of imagination of hopes and dreams
believing your self and pouring your heart out is all you need

to become a great writer just like everyone else
using your own unique way and the style you have, you can be more than great but a writer who is well respected
dont be afraid to write what you believe in, keping one thing in mind you've achieve one of the greatest gifts of all

you are the legend of what everone speaks, you are a writer of a great achievement

[*CrackedRearView*]

^ a summation of why I write.

My one criticism:

tell you about ones life
your thoughts, dreams and your deepest feelings

You're mixing up your tenses. Try and avoid using "ones" and "your" interchangably.

"Ones" is for more formal addressing. Labeling the reader "you" in this work is just fine, though.

Good job.

[Ekay]

I agree with CrackedRearView with why I write. It explains all our emotions we put unto paper. Into which we can't explain with just simple words. I applaud you on this.

[dispn0ygonekrazy]

srry guys lol i kinda had trouble on that piece i knew your and ones was like not even a good word but thnx ill try and improve it or better yet can u revise this for me.