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*mSz_dOrk_anGeL*
post Oct 17 2004, 04:54 PM
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Mmm I wrote it last night .. It's not good but whatever mellow.gif

He tries to make me see my beauty my amazing inner soul
He tries with all his might giving me all his heart,
Just so I can push him away.

He makes me think that I am beautiful and that I’m worth his time.
But every time he tells me so I always have to say no.
The more I resist the more he tries
But every time, I say it’s all he says is lies.
He can never know the real truth about
How he makes me feel.

So for now I will hide, all the things I feel inside.
He will never know why I lie and why I always want to hide.
All he can know is how I love him and how he makes my day.
So on this note I will bid you farewell and hope he never sees
The truth behind these eyes, which I never shall reveal.
 
yeseulx3
post Oct 17 2004, 04:56 PM
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Ah, mon Dieu !
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that's good! ^ ^
you wrote it last night?
i give you a thumbsup.gif
 
dispn0ygonekrazy
post Oct 17 2004, 05:20 PM
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nicely done
i like it good job
 
*mSz_dOrk_anGeL*
post Oct 17 2004, 05:26 PM
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Thanks to both of you ^_^
 
jambaJUICE
post Oct 17 2004, 07:39 PM
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Can't have the hand without the cock.
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Well said.

I feel the same way as well _dry.gif .
and I do such, to someone special...
But.. yeah you know the rest.

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