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 Oct 9 2004, 05:25 PM
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You say you love me like they always do
But deep down Your loving that girl you knew That girl who found and took your heart That girl who grasped it and tore it apart That girl you think about everyday I love you so much But I know she won’t go away The flame is still burning deep inside of you I wish I could drown you with my love Extinguish the memories of that girl you knew You cause me so much pain I hear about your obsession with her It drives me insane You can’t escape your feelings for her Constantly phoning and following And holding on to the love you once had There is nothing I can do But to carry on loving you and hoping That one day You’ll forget that girl you once knew |
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Oct 9 2004, 07:16 PM
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 don't worry, be happy~ Group: Member Posts: 1,538 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,899 |
wow!! that's such a good poem!! and very descriptive too.
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Oct 11 2004, 12:58 AM
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Heh...sounds...good?
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Oct 11 2004, 02:53 PM
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 creepy heather Group: Official Member Posts: 4,208 Joined: Aug 2004 Member No: 41,580 |
 nice poem
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Oct 11 2004, 03:16 PM
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te quiero Group: Banned Posts: 2,586 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 14,678 |
i love the way it poems. it's mirroring the way i'm thinking right now, which makes it depressing for me. =/
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Oct 11 2004, 04:32 PM
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 Kermit the frog = <3 Group: Member Posts: 2,315 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,215 |
wow. I love it.
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