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Dremy Afternoon // Version II
C.Lime.Jello.
post Oct 9 2004, 11:43 AM
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The voices talk too much... -.-u
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Boo. I'm back.
Hopefully this version is better.
(Could be worse though.)
NOTE :: So far I haven't figured out a way for it to work in both IE and Firefox. So, for now anyways, it looks best in IE.

http://www.xanga.com/dreamy_afternoon

I don't mind CC and flames.
I use them to cook my food. :P
(That's Constructive Critiscism for you people who were wondering. ^_^)
 
xmagicked
post Oct 9 2004, 11:45 AM
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nice job!!!!!

lol you posted ontop of me! lol
what you mean by you papercliped me? lol
 
C.Lime.Jello.
post Oct 9 2004, 11:52 AM
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http://www.fictionpress.com/read.php?storyid=1712499
^ Read that.

And then I have to explain that there is no system. Just the fact that I give paperclips whenever I feel a layout is exceptional or deseves a paperclip for effort.
Tha amount of paperclips determines how good I think a layout is. But how many and reason is determined on the spot.
 
emmalie
post Oct 9 2004, 12:49 PM
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hmm horizontal scrollbar :O...plain ...like a 5/10
 
C.Lime.Jello.
post Oct 9 2004, 12:54 PM
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hmm horizontal scrollbar :O...plain ...like a 5/10


..... Screen resolution? It works better in things over 800 x 600.
Mostly because that's the size of the image.
Can you tell me WHY it's plain?
Just saying 'plain' isn't good enough. I'd like to know WHY.
 
ThePrincessofTKD
post Oct 9 2004, 01:08 PM
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it`s okay. not bad. try adding more effects to it. [maybe that`s why emmalie was complaining about it being too plain.] but good job.

try looking at other people`s layouts and be inspired. there are better layouts.

in xanga showcase, don`t expect people to go crazy over your layout unless they`ve seen better.
 
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post Oct 9 2004, 01:13 PM
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i said it was plain because of the lack of effects it doesnt mean its bad ..jus simple and some people do think simple is better.
 
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post Oct 9 2004, 01:25 PM
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it`s okay. not bad. try adding more effects to it. [maybe that`s why emmalie was complaining about it being too plain.] but good job.
try looking at other people`s layouts and be inspired. there are better layouts.
in xanga showcase, don`t expect people to go crazy over your layout unless they`ve seen better.


Give me an example of an effect I can use that will work well?
(Please? I'm here to make it better.)
I do get inspired. I just don't have the almight PHOTOSHOP to go with the insperation.
(Don't have it. Can't use all the tutorials that go with it. -.-u -sigh-)
I know there are better layouts. I'm not claiming to be the best layout creator.
(In fact, I KNOW my layouts suck asss. =) That' why I'm here. To get better.)
I'm not expecting you people to go crazy. I want specific, constructive criticism.
(Because I write. I expect that, because you can't write a story and have someone say 'your story sucks. make it better.')
 
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post Oct 9 2004, 01:42 PM
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QUOTE(C.Lime.Jello. @ Oct 9 2004, 1:25 PM)
Give me an example of an effect I can use that will work well?
(Please? I'm here to make it better.)
I do get inspired. I just don't have the almight PHOTOSHOP to go with the insperation.
(Don't have it. Can't use all the tutorials that go with it. -.-u -sigh-)
I know there are better layouts. I'm not claiming to be the best layout creator.
(In fact, I KNOW my layouts suck asss. =) That' why I'm here. To get better.)
I'm not expecting you people to go crazy. I want specific, constructive criticism.
(Because I write. I expect that, because you can't write a story and have someone say 'your story sucks. make it better.')

you gave me the impression you did.

you could try adding a border on your bg. the font is so overrated so try adding effects to it. [the font on the bg] and add more effects on your links & font in the blog. adding a gif as a bg won`t do that much good.
 
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post Oct 9 2004, 01:48 PM
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you gave me the impression you did.
you could try adding a border on your bg. the font is so overrated so try adding effects to it. [the font on the bg] and add more effects on your links & font in the blog. adding a gif as a bg won`t do that much good.


I'm sorry. =)
The last time I tried adding a border to that bg, it turned blue. It doesn't match. -.-u
(I'll try and figure it out.... >.<)
.... Like.... Blur it or something? o.O I don't get that one.
(I'm sorry, I must sound so stupid. >.<)
Er.... Effects on the links? You're only allowed one hover. Lemme try tho.
What kind of effect on the blog font? It's arial.... o.O
(Do you mean, like, use a diffrent font?)
.gif image? Okay, I won't do that.
 
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post Oct 9 2004, 02:18 PM
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woah chill out every1 and have some respect!

now...go to my showcasr topic and leave me replys damnit
 
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post Oct 13 2004, 05:53 PM
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Wow, I LOVE YOUR LAYOUT, i am trying to make one like that, with the anime pix that i have
 
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post Oct 13 2004, 05:58 PM
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it's just so purrrrrdy!!!! me likey. my old layout was all grey so i've become pretty bored with the whole gray themes... that's the only reason why i'm giving you a 9.5/10
 
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post Oct 13 2004, 06:01 PM
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its okay, but it looks too much like a picture was slapped onto the background. try actually... doing something with it.

if i made any sense.

but yeah, its ok. but i'm not into anime. so its just a little less than ok. but then again. that's just me.
 
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post Oct 13 2004, 06:11 PM
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The image quality isn't good.
 

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