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 Oct 8 2004, 12:28 AM
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 What the fack.  Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519  |
You Don't Know You Don't Know You don't know But I'm not so well You don't know Because I'll never tell You don't know What makes me smile, what makes me frown You never know Because you're never around You told me once You'd be there for me You even promised me once That soon, everything will be clear to see What happened then? Why are things as they are now? When will things finally make sense? And bring me away from this doubt? You'll never know Because I'll never say What I've been wanting to for so long But if you want to know You'll have to find another way You don't even know So don't even try Don't even pretend to care Because it's all been a lie  
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Oct 8 2004, 01:15 AM
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 extraordiNARY Group: Member Posts: 257 Joined: Apr 2004 Member No: 12,428 |
 wow..your good..that was kinda of creepy but good at the same time.. 
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Oct 8 2004, 10:18 PM
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What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
Lol, thanks. Nice to get some feedback. Lol.
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Oct 9 2004, 07:17 PM
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 don't worry, be happy~ Group: Member Posts: 1,538 Joined: May 2004 Member No: 15,899 |
wow!! i loved that poem... sounded like a song.
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Oct 10 2004, 12:35 AM
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What the fack. Group: Official Member Posts: 6,164 Joined: Mar 2004 Member No: 8,519 |
Aww, thanks.
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Oct 10 2004, 10:16 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
QUOTE(tainted_angel @ Oct 7 2004, 9:28 PM) You don't know What makes me smile, what makes me frown You never know Because you're never around i think for that you'll never know will be better =P anyways all around i really enjoyed this poem and i haven't been around writing section for a while so i feel good to read something good right when i come back |
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