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What Must Not Be Seen, Poem... By Me...
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post Oct 7 2004, 08:43 PM
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I stepped into the doorway,
And saw what must not be seen,
I thought my eyes deceived me,
But I knew he was a fiend.

My mother was sitting there,
With a hand upon her cheek,
My father standing over her,
With a hand rose rather bleak.

Emotions running through me,
I wondered what I had seen,
Frightened, and despairing,
I ran and hoped not to be seen.

My mother tried to explain it,
My father tried as well,
But the feelings inside me,
Knew not all was well.

I brushed it off not knowing,
The vast hole left in my heart,
While I pretended all was forgiven,
The pain still crept in my thoughts.

Now it has returned again,
The pain that the night had brought,
But I can’t bring myself to tell anyone,
For fear of what they thought.

So now no one will ever know,
The pain within my soul,
For I won’t let anyone in,
To see the pain in whole.

Edit: Ummm yeah... I kinda wrote this after a while... It is a true story...
 
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post Oct 7 2004, 08:50 PM
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FEEDBACK ay random guy nicely done poem i can relate to it and every word and line meant something to relate in life i like it good job
 
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post Oct 7 2004, 08:52 PM
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wow this poem is like soo good... keep writing love it =P
 
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post Oct 7 2004, 08:53 PM
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man sam 100 something posts wahhh im still in 200 something lol
 
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post Oct 9 2004, 02:03 PM
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That's for the compliments I appreciate them...
 
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post Oct 9 2004, 07:16 PM
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wow!!! that's an awsome poem!!
 

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