Broken Hearts mending |
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 Sep 30 2004, 02:26 PM
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 I'm not crazy..  Group: Member Posts: 52 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 50,670  |
Okay, this is the first poem that I'm posting here. (Actually, my first topic) Well, I really enjoy any sorts of writing (English). Here goes nothing!!
Broken hearts unite as one When we lose what we had won. Broken hearts march far on Singing words from a song. No where to began or start What we feel in our hearts. The sorrow of our tears What is next, is what we fear. Slowly we move out The pain we feel is no doubt. The little gentle kisses Only feel like fairytale blisses. The lies that you and I told Only can break and fold. Sweetly we try To wipe our cries. No more going on, Sine my life will flow... As a broken song. -I wrote this poem today, since I was very depressed today. Well, I hope you guys enjoyed the poem! (Be nice about it!!  )
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Sep 30 2004, 03:50 PM
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SOS Brigade!! Group: Member Posts: 2,573 Joined: Sep 2004 Member No: 47,775 |
WTFUDGE jessica where are you =P
nice poem =P did you go home? |
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Sep 30 2004, 05:27 PM
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 Will write poetry for sex! Group: Member Posts: 1,110 Joined: Jan 2004 Member No: 600 |
Decent rhythm. That's all. Welcome to the forums.
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