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post Sep 25 2004, 10:30 PM
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Hrm, I really want to start seeing Sam (rainydaiis) and Mike (dispn0ygonekrazy) start posting some work that doesn't have to do with love.

I'm getting a little tired of seeing the same things over and over... _dry.gif

Try writing with some different inspiration and see how that turns out. You won't know your capabilities without working your way outside of what you're used to, especially if it's along the lines of utilizing the same topic over and over.

Again, it's self-expression and of course completely your choice. It's great you guys are able and willing to open up with your emotions about such a sensitive subject. All I'm suggesting is that maybe challenging yourself to write on different things will help you grow as a writer, and help you further express yourself to the fullest, especially when it comes to an all too common subject such as love.

Good work so far...Any other suggestions/advice/help you guys need, just ask.

-Joe.
 
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post Sep 25 2004, 10:50 PM
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Haha... I love what you've said... and you said it very well...

I hope nobody is offended by this... but they should take this and run with it.


VARIETY, PEOPLE. V A R I E T Y.
 
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post Sep 25 2004, 10:57 PM
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Bleh.
I agree.
Toooo many love poems.
HOW MANY PEOPLE CAN BE THAT HAPPY?!
Agh.
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Yeah, it gets kinda boring just reading love poems/stories that are similar (if not virtually the same). Like Mel said, some variety would really do this forum wonders. (the writing forum)
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I'm not saying your poems/stories are bad, it just gets kinda dull reading love story, after love story, after love story..
Bleh.
 
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post Sep 25 2004, 11:19 PM
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lol yes sire master!!! ive already started something that aint about love lol srry for all the love poems people i was just in that mood for it happy.gif so umm yeah ill take it to consideration masta!! thnx peace
 
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post Sep 25 2004, 11:23 PM
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No need for apologies.

I'll be sure to check it out right now.
 
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post Sep 25 2004, 11:55 PM
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the problem the inspirations are always on love but ill try new stuff i did a death poem guess i can do another =P

newaiiz how does a writing family kind of thing sound =P
 
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post Sep 25 2004, 11:59 PM
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good
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:00 AM
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btw i aint gonna write poems until monday... i got a busy weekend and yeah my minds been too hectic.. so sry guys T.T
 
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depending on the poems sam..!! we all trying something new lol
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:20 AM
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QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 25 2004, 11:55 PM)
newaiiz how does a writing family kind of thing sound =P

Aren't we already one?

I dunno, if you want to make it more organized, then I'll be more than glad to talk it over with you guys. I sense a blogring being born in the process, LoL. laugh.gif
The pitch sounds kinda....Well, to be blunt, Gay. Writing family?
Haha, well, we can change that, eh?
 
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The Ambiguously Gay Writing Trio?
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:22 AM
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all mine are different enough, right?
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:25 AM
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QUOTE(omg_melface @ Sep 25 2004, 9:21 PM)
The Ambiguously Gay Writing Trio?

wow she got us a lovely name =P
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:28 AM
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Very funny, Mel. laugh.gif
You're just jealous over the homo-erotic fun we'll be having. wink.gif

Haha, Anyway I've only seen one submission from you, ryfitaDF, So I can't say. Nonetheless, there's nothing you should be worrying about.
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:29 AM
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hey i liked the name =P
we'll make a royal family just like the game royality we'll be the writing royalty and mel will be the masters wife? lolz ionno
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:31 AM
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LMAO masters wife eh....lol how well the name sounds koo but we aew GAY ohmy.gif lol but the writing thing the idea i think its awesome
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:32 AM
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GWT GAY WRITING TRIO =P lolz sounds funny
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:36 AM
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hahahahaha yeh but WHY ARE WE GAY IN THE FIRST PLACE ?!??!?!!? lol
how bouth this
 
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hahahahaha yeh but WHY ARE WE GAY IN THE FIRST PLACE ?!??!?!!? lol
how bouth this group.gif lookie a group... dont we have a 4th member??
 
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yes we'll find a fourth member!! and we'll be gay like that... =P
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:45 AM
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I'm going to slowly back away from this gay stuff now...

_unsure.gif _unsure.gif _unsure.gif

And yes, Mel will be my wife. Hell, she already is. Haha. laugh.gif
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 12:48 AM
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whens ur honey MOON!! =P
 
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QUOTE
all mine are different enough, right?

Yup, yours differ.
They're really good, by the way. x]
 
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QUOTE(MasteRxKiD @ Sep 25 2004, 11:45 PM)
And yes, Mel will be my wife. Hell, she already is. Haha. laugh.gif

yes, I am...<333

Honeymoon? soon.. =]
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 01:09 AM
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the next door neighbors better bring some ear muffons because theirs gonna be something goin on =P
 
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lol very very funnnnny!!
 
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post Sep 26 2004, 10:21 AM
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writing ROYALITY =P or writing pwnage =P
Master - Master
Melface- Masters Wife
Mike- Masters consultatant
Sam- Masters Jester... LOLz
 
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you two are so strange... _unsure.gif


Oh, sweetie... you forgot to tell them that not all poems are supposed to rhyme.
 
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im just special =P
 
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QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 26 2004, 1:09 AM)
the next door neighbors better bring some ear muffons because theirs gonna be something goin on =P

Trust me, they're going to need more than ear muffs to drown out what's going to be going on, LoL. laugh.gif

Oh, and yeah, you're right, Mel...

Just keep in mind that all poems don't have to rhyme.
In my opinion, they come out much better.
 
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HUH WHY AM I A CONSULTANT?!?!?!!?!? whats my purpose anywayz lol
 
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What's this noise you boys are talking about? EH? huh.gif [puts hands on hips] Hmph?!
 
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lol mel hmmm what is the noise lol i think we all know what it is =P
 
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Noise coming from whom?
 
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I like the love poems...why would someone really wanna read about death....thas sooo depressing...write more love poems...... :)
 
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QUOTE(happygoluckyng @ Sep 26 2004, 4:55 PM)
I like the love poems...why would someone really wanna read about death....thas sooo depressing...write more love poems...... :)

what are you talking about? .... jesus christ....Girl, just hush, leave it to the master.



Sam.. mike... you don't have to write about death to stay away from writing about love... there are other things besides love and death
 
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lol i know im going on a variety of things right now im working on a story AND YEAH MASTA JOE THNX ALOT I GOT AN A on my essay the other day WOOT WOOT!! lol for once im following the regulations and guidelines of essays if i like ever need help ima go straight to u THNX AGAIN MASTA
 
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wahhh theres sex =P
 
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QUOTE(happygoluckyng @ Sep 26 2004, 5:55 PM)
I like the love poems...why would someone really wanna read about death....thas sooo depressing...write more love poems...... :)

I never said anything about only writing about Death. They choose what they want to write. I just made the point that they should open up their options when it comes to writing.

I'm sure you don't want to read 'depressing' work, but honestly, not everything can be about bunnies and flowers. Sorry to be harsh, but, I believe the best writing is the one that reflects the authors inner most emotions, life experiences and views on life. This makes it even easier for an audience to relate and highly appreciate their work . Many people have had their lives changed over pen on paper, emotions translated into words. Why? Because of ideals, struggle, self-conflict and discovery, and truth.

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lol i know im going on a variety of things right now im working on a story AND YEAH MASTA JOE THNX ALOT I GOT AN A on my essay the other day WOOT WOOT!! lol for once im following the regulations and guidelines of essays if i like ever need help ima go straight to u THNX AGAIN MASTA


I'm glad that I made that much of a difference. By all means, you can turn to me for help when it comes to writing. I actually love writing essays for school too, which is pretty pathetic, but I see it as challenges - for myself as a writer. At least that's what gets me through them.
 
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happy.gif interesting thread...
*puts on party hat* tongue.gif

i dont mind alot of love poems, there are so many things to express about love...there is also love in death...just do it in an original unique and expressive way....no more adolescent/teen/preteen oh im going to kill myself and my bf sucks oh yeah my parents do too "I WANT THIS CHICK SO BAD BUT SHE THINKS IM UGLY AND STUPID BECAUSE...IAM!" crap...
 
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QUOTE(Heathasm @ Sep 27 2004, 7:21 AM)
happy.gif interesting thread...
*puts on party hat* tongue.gif

i dont mind alot of love poems, there are so many things to express about love...there is also love in death...just do it in an original unique and expressive way....no more adolescent/teen/preteen oh im going to kill myself and my bf sucks oh yeah my parents do too "I WANT THIS CHICK SO BAD BUT SHE THINKS IM UGLY AND STUPID BECAUSE...IAM!" crap...

Have you read most of the love poems here at cB? laugh.gif
 
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QUOTE(omg_melface @ Sep 27 2004, 8:34 AM)
Have you read most of the love poems here at cB? laugh.gif

lol...not really
im going to start reading more of the poems here though, i kind of just descovered the section tongue.gif
 
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AHHH!!!! i must write poems about life now =P bwahahhahahaha

and whens the honeymoon guys? ill see you guys off
 
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QUOTE(Heathasm @ Sep 27 2004, 7:37 AM)
lol...not really
im going to start reading more of the poems here though, i kind of just descovered the section tongue.gif

Not many have discovered this part of cB... that just might be a good thing considering the fact that most cB members can't even spell simple words of the english language correctly... Sad thing is, they do that on purpose. stubborn.gif
 
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^ so harsh T.T i can spell... or i think i can =P

anyways no one actually comes to this section... when i found out there was a writing section i was like when was this here.. sucks T.T
 
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lol i didnt discover the writing section untill awhile ago so far ive been here most of the time and yeah when is the honeymoon mel if it does happen have fun dont forget to provide the ear muffs XD
 
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they dont need ear muffs the neighbors need to move rooms about 4 rooms away =P lolz anyways i found this out just browsing through the sections i was like interest? and yeah writing was in there
 
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Haha... you two guys are just so silly...
I'm not sure exactly.... but...


Okay, it's going to be the week of March 28th, 2005... we're leaving for Japan together at 5:26am from Los Angeles...

but... i'm not sure exactly... rolleyes.gif




off topic: err this has been bothering me.. IT'S MASTER... mastER KTHXbye.
 
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JAPAN? that aint romantic... its gonna be so crowded..but ur choice i would go to thaite... a paradise resort somewhere in the thailands... its so nice =P their you can have MUCHO FUN!!

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QUOTE(omg_melface @ Sep 27 2004, 8:51 AM)
Not many have discovered this part of cB... that just might be a good thing considering the fact that most cB members can't even spell simple words of the english language correctly... Sad thing is, they do that on purpose. stubborn.gif

i know alot of words
but i dont know how to spell them laugh.gif
that is why it is not a bad thing to re-read what you've writtenŹ.Ź
 
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QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 27 2004, 7:59 AM)
JAPAN? that aint romantic... its gonna be so crowded..but ur choice i would go to thaite... a paradise resort somewhere in the thailands... its so nice =P their you can have MUCHO FUN!!

MUCHO FUN rolleyes.gif

We have enough romance in bed.

Who says honeymoons have to be romantic?

resorts? paradise? bah... I LIVE IN PARADISE... I don't want to go to the other side of the world to go... see paradise again, silly.


Italy wouldn't be bad, though :]
 
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wow march 28 2005 thats like months away and in japan lol thats uhhh a good plave i think i lived there for awhile had to force myself to learn japanese but hey your honeymoon your way
 
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OOO im sorry... i forgot the bed is paradise... =P hehe its just me!!! italy sounds nice!!
 
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honeymoon or not... Joe and I are going to Japan. happy.gif
 
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japan is scary... ive been there... woah too many people.. i was walking but not knowing where i was goin... the springs there are like freakin good =P
 
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JAPAN!! well how bout some greeting words like kunichiwa - hi how are you and sayanara - goodbye and sensei - master XD and putting san at the end of the first name is showing respect in JAPAN ex mine would be michaelsan and sam would be samsan and joe is joesan and mel is melsan get the picture?
 
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haha... sensei isnt master btw its teacher and its KOnichiwa... and for the names when you type it you put the - so its sam-san... and usually thats for older people than you...
 
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hey hey dont need to correct me lol i was getting to the point there sensei is master dammit lol and sam san mike san same thing lol and i think we are off topic on this lol suppose to be a suggestion on writing lol wayyyy off topic but i dont mind i like where its going
 
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QUOTE(omg_melface @ Sep 27 2004, 8:58 AM)
Okay, it's going to be the week of March 28th, 2005... we're leaving for Japan together at 5:26am from Los Angeles...

Honeymoon time!!! laugh.gif

This thread was was one of the first ones I noticed when I re-joined CB. This and the Debate section. I don't post much there though, 'cause...well, obvious reasons. Haha.

Oh and Mike, other than 'San' there's also 'Kun', etc.

Haha, BTW, my one friend challenged me to write a poem about her. For no particular reason either. She said that she 'wanted to see how creative I am.' So I'll post that when I'm done. I've never really written a poem about a friend in that manner. So let's see how that turns out. I like challenges, despecially when it comes to something I enjoy/am good at.
 
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hahaha i would like to see the joe sensei aka joe-san joe-kun BTW i had no mistakes on my essay today wooooot first time no mistakes thnx to mah masta joe WOOT

all credit of my writing success goes to joe
 
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sensei isnt master.. i have freakin japanese CLASS you cannot test me!!! its teacher!!!! T.T senin is more like master... goodness
 
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lol i know that time i was calling him teacher hahahaahah got u there sam :P
 
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lolz wth? im lost now T.T
 
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u thought i didnt read ur last post hahaah u assumed i was calling him master grrr lol i take german lol as a language and it rox
 
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writing suggestions and we get into japanese... wtheck is this +P anyways i tried writting poems with no rhymes was pretty interesting.. not sayin i enjoyed it =P but new experiences are new experiences

btw ill post them later after because im lazy right now
 
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ahahah just like u are one lazy mother effff lol j/p sam yeah not that i enjoy without the rhyme but hey new expirience
 
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post Sep 27 2004, 07:26 PM
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experiences teaches you =P lolz
 
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QUOTE(rainnydaiis @ Sep 27 2004, 7:23 PM)
writing suggestions and we get into japanese... wtheck is this +P anyways i tried writting poems with no rhymes was pretty interesting.. not sayin i enjoyed it =P but new experiences are new experiences

btw ill post them later after because im lazy right now

I find it harder to express myself knowing that the last word has to rhyme with a line above it.

So, picking out that word means changing the sentence before it, and it just becomes a wreck for me.

I'm not saying I can't do it...I just prefer writing without that chain holding me down, and the result is much better for me.

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post Sep 27 2004, 11:15 PM
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haha of course =P i love to rhyme but i do the same rhymes but still get different lines..
 

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